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DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010. DimitriW made 29 other changes.
DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
DREW
Even when mom is not worried, she is still angry.
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Drew took his shoes off and threw them at Jocelyn
DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
jocelyn
How long do you think mom will be mad before she
DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
DREW
NO, now get out of my bed.
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jocelyN
Drew, you an't got nobody to call so let me use you phone now.
DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Drew
NO!
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jocelyn
Can I barrow your phone until mine gets fixed
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Women
Whats happening with the youth young people in our inner cities of America? The picture is far from pretty. Today two high school boys were involved in a vicious robbery and shoot-out in New York's Harlem community.
DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Drew
Why don't you go to your own room girl?
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Pops stated that it wasn't any safer down there in Savannah then Harlem
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mom
I still think you guys should finish school down south.
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MoM
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Mom was in the kitchen washing dishes
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mom
I still think you guys should finish school down south,
DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Drew
Moms voice started cracking and I was wondering why she turned to this station when she knows mom was going to get mad.
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Its just tears me up to see young people wasting their lives like that every time you pick up the news paper or watch the news, its more of our young men either being killed or going to jail.
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Its just tears me up to see young people wasting their lives like that every time you pick up the news paper or watch the news, its more of our young men either being killed or going to jail.
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mom
That is because they were not 18 years old but you will be able to read about it in the news paper tomorrow.
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Pops
You can read about it in the papers though
DimitriW edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
MOm
Its just tears me up to see young people wasting their lives like that every time you pick up the news paper or watch the news, its more of our young men either being killed or going to jail.
DimitriW added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
MOm
Its just tears me up to see young people wasting their lives like that
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Pops
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MOM
That is because they were not 18 yet
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jocelyn
They didn't give the names of the two boys who were involved in the case.
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Jocelyn switched channels.
DimitriW added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Jocelyn switched channels
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Spokes person
At one-thirty afternoon, two teenage boys attempted to hold up a store on 126th street and Lenox Av. As they ran down the street, they encountered and off duty police officer who sensed what was going on. They two boys opened fire on the police and the policeman shot back
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The image of the screen switched to the police stretching yellow tap across the sidewalk in front of a discount store.
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Women
Whats happening with the youth of America? Well, if your talking about the young people in our inner cities, the picture is far from pretty. Today two high school boys were involved in a vicious robbery and shoot-out in New York's Harlem community.
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