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This is your first scene. Last edited by lewy, 7 months ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

Ext. street - midnight

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The following scene takes place with an angelic, operatic track playing over it.

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Disappointment waits by the side of the road late at night. SNapchat filters swipe across the screen showing that it's "23:58" then "-4 degrees" and then "Friday feels". A car pulls up and stops. Disapointment gets in.

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Inside is an older man, about 35 years older than Disappointment, who is 22 years old. They seem to know each other. They are conversing, awkwardly. It's a hookup.

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medium shot - showing inside of car only

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The man drives and disappointment in in the front next to him. Their conversation seems awkward but there is a few laughs. They seem hopeful, excited.They look for a place to park, pointing at different places. They end up driving through dark roads and stop at dead end. They look at each other for an awkward beat, then start to kiss with increasing intensity.

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They kiss and undress. Disappointment goes down on the man for a period of time. The man looks set to reciprocate, to Disappointments delight, but instead of going down on him he picks up a condom on the floor next to disappointment. He puts it on as Disappointment mounts him and they fuck. Disappointment ejaculates. The man doesn't. They keep trying but eventually, the man tells Disappointment to stop - basically shoving Disappointment off his penis.

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On the drive home, they look considerably less excited.Disappointment tried to make conversation, tell a joke, with no response. The operatic music stops.

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FANTASY MOMENT (FM: THE FOLLOWING HAPPENS IN DISAPPOINTMENTS HEAD)

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The Man:

Hey, that was brilliant. I'm sorry i didn't cum ... y'know, performance anxiety. You were brilliant. Thank fuck for grindr. Can i see you again?

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But in reality what happens is (REAL):

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Disappointment:

So ... have a good time?

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ext. the street

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Disapointment is thrown out of the car and lies on the ground.

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tittles: disappointment

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