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This is your first scene. Last edited by vsfifthgrade, on 02/07/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

INt. gym-henderson elementry

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Group of kids (six on each sides) playing dodge ball. Occassionally kid gets out.

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Camera gets hit by a ball

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Kid 3 throws ball at friend,hard,at face and the friend doesn't get up.

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Other kids

OWWWWWWW!!!!!!

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Kid 1

Yells Are you aright???

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Kid 2

Someone go get a teacher!!

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Kid runs of camera to get teacher and all kids gather around!

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Best friend runs to hurt kid!

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Best friend

Jake! Jake! Jake! Jake are you aright!!!

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Best friend (CONT'D)

No respond

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Best friend rolls over jake and checks his pulse. Nothing

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Teacher comes running in

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Teacher

Is he okay?

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In a scared voice

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Best friend

He doesn't have a pulse!!

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TEACHER

Someone call 911

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Kid 4 runs to his book bag and then pulls out phone and dials 911

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Operator

911 whats your emergency

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Kid 4

A kid in my class in not breathing. He got hit by a ball hard and fell down and is not breathing

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Operator

Help is on the way just stay calm and get a teacher to tell her to do cpr.

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kid

The operator told you to do cpr

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Kid talks back into phone

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Kid (CONT'D)

Thank You

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Operator hangs up

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Jake gets up and says that hes okay, but nobody responds or even looks at him

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The abulance arrivs and the teacher says

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Teacher

Hes not going to make it

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Jake looks behind him and saw himself

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Jake starts crying then goes to his friend and then he walks by him then tripped the went into the kid body then the kid says

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Best friend

I feel a cold feeling in me!!

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Kid inside kid doesnt move and ethier does the kid outside.

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Then the kid inside steps out and the kid outside says

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kid (CONT'D)

That was weird

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kid runs of with a glommy face

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