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bschulz3 added a transition in "Scene 3" on 10/13/2013. bschulz3 made 155 other changes.
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Mr. Rylan and the puppy are seen in the foreground of the shot. Russell grins as he watches them.
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mrs. rylan
Oh, I know Russell doesn't like him one bit. We shouldn't even bother to give him a name. I can take him back to the shelter first thing tomorrow.
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Mr. Rylan and the puppy are seen in the foreground of the shot
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russell
Nah, he's all right. Without him, this whole conversation wouldn't have happened.
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mrs. rylan
Oh, I know Russell doesn't like him one bit. I can take him back to the shelter first thing tomorrow.
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Mrs. Rylan smiles mischievously.
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mr. rylan
Now, about this dog.
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Mr. Rylan stands up.
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The puppy runs over and begins sniffing Mr. Rylan's shoes.
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The puppy runs over and begins sniffing Mr. Rylan's shoes.
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mr. rylan
I'm sorry that I haven't been around lately. I've been so caught up in getting ahead.
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He sighs.
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Mr. rylan
Well, we can't let that happen, can we? Russell loves soccer.I'm sorry that I haven't been around lately.
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Russell is seen on the left side of the shot. Mr. Rylan faces him again and kneels down as he makes eye contact.
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Russell is seen on the left side of the shot. Mr. Rylan faces him again and makes eye contact.
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Mr. rylan
Well, we can't let that happen, can we? Russell loves soccer.
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Mr. Rylan faces Russell again.
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Mr. rylan
Well, we can't let that happen, can we?
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mrs. rylan
His coach moved soccer practice across town. I told him yesterday that I didn't have time to drive him there and back everyday.
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mr. rylan
What? Since when?
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Mrs. Rylan is seen over Mr. Rylan's shoulder.
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mrs. rylan
I don't care about the money, Frank. Our son is growing up right now. I want you to be here for that, and if you get a promotion, you're going to get even more absorbed in work. Even if they offer you time off, it'll be harder to take it.
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mr. rylan
But...never mind about the dog for now. I thought this new job was what you both wanted. We'll have money to pay off our mortgage, and then we can spend more time together.
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He gestures to the dog.
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russell
I think we have our culprit.
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Mrs. Rylan nods but still presses a few buttons. A recorded monotone voice says, "Erased messages," and then Mr. Rylan's message plays back.
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russell
I think I know what might have happened to that message. You're sure there's no new messages on the phone, Mom?
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Russell cuts in.
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mr. Rylan
Since when do we have a dog?
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The puppy barks from outside the shot.
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mrs. rylan
I mean, you forgot to leave that phone message. You must be tired.
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Mrs. Rylan
Honey, I'm sorry I yelled, but listen. Things have gotten crazy around here since you took that job. And you say that you'll have more time off when you get promoted, but is it worth it? Is it worth running all over the country on these trips, not seeing your family or getting enough sleep?
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She laughs half-heartedly.
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mr. rylan
What? Since when did this happen?
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Mr. Rylan looks to his wife.
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