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bschulz3 edited dialogue in "Scene 3" on 10/14/2013. bschulz3 made 34 other changes.
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russell
Nah, he's all right. Without him, this whole conversation wouldn't have happened.
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Russell swallows hard and nods. The puppy runs over and begins sniffing Mr. Rylan's shoes.
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The puppy runs over and begins sniffing Mr. Rylan's shoes.
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He stands and pulls a soccer ball out of his bag. He and his dad begin playing fetch with the puppy.
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russell
Nah, he's all right. Without him, we wouldn't have had this whole conversation.
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Mr. rylan
Well, we can't let that happen, can we? Russell loves soccer.
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Russell is seen on the left side of the shot. Mr. Rylan kneels down as he makes eye contact with him.
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mrs. rylan
His coach moved soccer practice across town. I told him yesterday that I didn't have time to drive him there and back every day.
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Mrs. Rylan nods but still presses a few buttons. A recorded monotone voice says, "Erased messages," and then part Mr. Rylan's message plays back. The room is silent for a moment as a new realization dawns on the family.
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Russell cuts in.
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russell
I believe we have our culprit.
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Mrs. Rylan nods but still presses a few buttons. A recorded monotone voice says, "Erased messages," and then Mr. Rylan's message plays back. The room is silent for a moment as a new realization dawns on the family.
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Mrs. Rylan nods but still presses a few buttons. A recorded monotone voice says, "Erased messages," and then Mr. Rylan's message plays back. The room is silent for a moment as a new realization dawns on the family.
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russell
I think I know what might have happened to that message. You're sure there's no new messages on the phone, Mom?
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russell
I think I know what might have happened to that message. You're sure there's no new messages on the phone, Mom?
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Mrs. Rylan
Honey, I'm sorry I yelled, but listen. Things have gotten crazy around here since you took that job. And you say that you'll have more time off, but is it worth it? Is it worth running all over the country on these trips, not seeing your family or getting enough sleep?
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mr. rylan (CONT'D)
Sure, I guess it'd be better if I was home more often, but I thought we were making this work...
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The two face each other across the counter while they converse.
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The two are seen in profile.
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Mr. Rylan walks towards his wife. Mrs. Rylan looks flustered but forces a smile.
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Her voice rises as she grows increasingly exasperated.
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mrs. rylan
What message?
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mr. rylan (CONT'D)
What? Is something wrong...?
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Russell is seen in profile in the foreground of the shot. Behind him, Mrs. Rylan stands at the kitchen counter unpacking her groceries. She pulls out peppers and a cutting board and begins to prepare dinner. A clicking sound is heard from outside the shot as the front door is unlocked. Mrs. Rylan and Russell turn in the direction of the noise.
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He stands up quickly at the sound of the front door opening.
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