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INT. The end!
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Donald
Okay, we're good, let's go.
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Donald walks on ahead a few paces and turns around. Steve is visibly relieved he made Donald calm down. As Donald reaches Steve walking in the other direction he stops as just passes him. He turns around and takes a long deep sniff of Steve's behind. After sniffing Donald speaks promptly
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Donald
Okay...okay good. FRIENDS AGAIN!
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Donald begins to visibly relax as Steve pats him on the shoulder, rubbing him a bit on every third pat. Donald begins to speak calmly.
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steve
Nooo, Nooo, not at all. Shhh it's okay. I don't think you act like a dog, it's okay. Just relax, yeah that's better.
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Donald continues to repeat those exact words, but each time getting louder with volume and more inchorent. It eventually sounds like barking. Steve throws his hands up, he begins to speak softly and assertively
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Donald
YOU THINK I ACT LIKE A DOG?! YOU THINK I ACT LIKE A DOG?!
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Donald stops peeing, zips up his fly quickly and looks very angry, he rushes over to Steve and begins shouting
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steve
Seriously?! SERIOUSLY?! YOU'RE GOING TO PISS RIGHT THERE!?! What the hell is wrong with you?! Do you not know that it's not socially acceptable to act like a FRIGGEN DOG all the time?! Jesus Christ!
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Before Steve has time to respond Donald has already un-zipped his pants and began to urinate on the side of the garbage can. Steve begins to shout at Donald.
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donald
Hey. Can you just keep an eye out for me?
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Donald and Steve are walking together down a busy pedestrian street. Donald is always a few paces a head of Steve, circling around fire hydrants, lamp posts and signs. He is saying hello to everyone who walks by and then turns back to whatever he was focusing on at that moment. Donald circles around one garbage can in particular twice, and begins to speak to Steve
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They both get up and walk out of the living room and out of the shot, the screen fades to black
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They both get up and walk out of the living room
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steve
Alright, alright. Let's go.
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Donald does not verbally respond, but continues to look at Steve, trying to evoke sympathy.
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Steve
Seriously.
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Donald
Yes.
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Steve
Lost?
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Steve looks dumbfound
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Donald
but.... but.... I don't like going for walks alone. It's kind of scary out there... and I'm... I'm kind of afraid I might get lost.
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Donald's face drops into a pout. He sits down next to Steve and begins to convince him. He is giving him puppy dog eyes.
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Steve
Yeah, I don't know. I'm reading and relaxing, feeling pretty lazy. You go though, thanks for asking.
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Steve responds curtly.
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Donald
Yeah, yeah you're right, I'm just feeling cooped up, I wanna go for a walk, you wanna come for a walk with me, please?
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Donald backs away from the window and starts pacing
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Steve
DUDE! What's wrong man?! People turn around in driveways all the time, it's NOT a big deal. REEEEEEEEEELAX.
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Steve puts down his book and is clearly getting annoyed.
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Donald
Hey! Hey! You can't just do that! You're supposed to visit! VISIT!
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Donald begins to shout
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Donald
You think? I don't know.... Why would someone do that? I bet they are hear to visit us, that'd be awesome, they'd totally be int.... Oh, they're turning around.
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Donald isn't convinced by Steve.
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Steve
I don't know, I wouldn't worry about it too much. They are probably just turning around.
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Steve responds in a very uncaring tone.
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Jon responds in a very uncaring tone.
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Donald
Who do you think that is? Do you think we know them? Why would they be pulling into our driveway.
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Donald and Steve are sitting in their living room watching T.V. It is mid-afternoon/evening and the blinds on the windows are open. A car pulls into their driveway and Donald jumps up and runs to the window. He turns to talk to Steve, but only turns his head, leaving his body facing the window.
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The two walk out of the shot and the screen fades to black
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Donald
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dave
What can I say man? Donald is a one of a kind dude, but he is a solid guy. Super loyal. Love him for that. Anyway, let me show you the rest of the place.
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Donald scurries off out of the room and runs up back upstairs, Steve looks at Dave for some kind of answer for what just went on. Dave shrugs.
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Donald
AWESOME!!!! OKAY WE'LL DO THAT LATER, FOR NOW, IMMA GO LAY DOWN FOR A BIT!
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Donald gives him a high five
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Steve
Uhhhh. Yeah. Pretty big fan of being outside... Sunshine, fresh air, all that sort of thing...
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Steve has a very puzzled look on his face, he isn't quite sure what to make of the situation, or how to respond.
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Donald
OOOOOH MAN I HATE SQUIRRELS! IM ALWAYS CHASING THEM OUT OF THE YARD! I LOVE BEING OUTSIDE, DO YOU LIKE BEING OUTSIDE?! OUTSIDE IS THE GREATEST!!!
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Donald whips himself up into even more of a frenzy
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