Dreaming Alone

15 year old Adriana, dreams of becoming an actress but her parents believe she should become something more practical.When her Mum refuses to let her attend a performing arts boarding school she is ready to do whatever it takes to prove to everyone that she will become the actress she dreams of.

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Maybe you should make it more simple like:

Adriana,(age),dreams of becoming an actress but her parents believe she should become something more practical.When her Mum refuses to let her attend a performing arts boarding school she is ready to do whatever it takes to prove to everyone that she will become the actress she dreams of.

Thats just a suggestion.I have more ways of wording it.Let me know what you think — Princessuniverse00 a year ago

Thank u for the comment it was very good , i do think yours was better wording. and i used it, i just changed a few words. I have a few questions for you it is about the script:
Why did u join?
Do you think this was fictional or based on someone?
Can you please tell me what you think about my script? — caregirl5 a year ago

I Joined because i wanted to help you and i have thought of a lot of stories about very similar senarios.I also relate to this story very well because i wanted to do things like this and my parents told me no and im still trying to prove i can, even though im much older now (21 lol).

I think it was based on some one because as i have stated it has happened to me and i know that i am not the only one.I figured it was based on you.lol

I think that so far it is good and alot more people need to help eachother in scripts which are movie,play,song and tv based because its really the writers that make the star.People are so focused on the actress or the singer they dotn think about the more "behind" the scenes people like writers.

I think you are heading in the right direction with your script and it will be a nice play or movie with help.

i cant tell you what i completely think until we get deeper in the story.

Ill be here to help when i can feel free to ask anything — Princessuniverse00 a year ago

Again thank you for your great comment, I am not a very experienced writer and thanks for saying that I am heading in the right direction. You said that I could ask you anything, and I was wondering do you have any tips on how to make the story line better or add something different because like you said before there are many people with the idea close to it. — caregirl5 a year ago

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