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TTagliaferro inserted an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. more
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TTagliaferro added a comment to Dreams of Independence two years ago. TTagliaferro made 1 other comment and 2 other changes. more
I dont know how I feel about Joe asking where her mom and dad is. She is 18-20 so her parents are necessary. I think him asking if she is running away from something might be better.

If Joe Acknowledges that she might be running away from her parents, we lose Joe's early innocence. Otherwise as a good old man, wouldn't he try to get her to go back to her family?
JenaSnelling edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago. JenaSnelling made 1 other comment and 41 other changes. more
Joe
Well, little miss, Maxy and I are headed clear across the country, so if you want to ride with your lovable and caring new best friend...and an old geezer, you're welcome in our truck.
JenaSnelling added a slugline in "This is your first scene." two years ago. JenaSnelling made 2 other changes. more
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