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skaro5 added a transition in "EXT. The Mall - After School" on 01/27/2013. skaro5 made 62 other changes.
skaro5 added a transition in "EXT. The Mall - After School" on 01/27/2013 [view]
skaro5 added dialogue in "EXT. The Mall - After School" on 01/27/2013 [view]
Winnie
Don't worry. Someone nice is going to buy you. Someone who'll take good care of you, I promise.
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store owner
Well, other people want to look too. You've been cramped in front of that cage for half an hour.
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dinah
We're just looking.
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Dinah stands up.
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store owner
You girls want that white one?
skaro5 added dialogue in "EXT. The Mall - After School" on 01/27/2013 [view]
dinah
See? You have to think the words 'I Love You' as you do it. Otherwise, it won't work.
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Dinah demonstrates and Cinders meows. Dinah smiles.
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Dinah demonstrates and Cinders meows.
skaro5 added dialogue in "EXT. The Mall - After School" on 01/27/2013 [view]
dinah
Do you know how to say 'I love you' to a cat? You blink three times really slowly, like this.
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Winnie
Look. She's tiring to bat your finger.
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dinah
A little.
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Dinah presses her knuckle against the glass of Cinder's display.
skaro5 added dialogue in "EXT. The Mall - After School" on 01/27/2013 [view]
Winnie
Do you... remember her? Your mom?
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Winnie wraps her arms around her ribs.
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dinah
I know. It's okay.
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Winnie
Not you. I mean, yes, you, but-
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Dinah gets quiet.
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Winnie
Poor thing. Can you imagine how horrible it would be to be this teeny, little thing and not even have your mother to take care of you?
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dinah
Which is perfect. After all, she's kind of an orphan, too, just like the real Cinderella.
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Winnie
We should name her Cinders, short for Cinderella.
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Winnie and Dinah find a cute white kitten with soot colored paws.
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INT. INT. Mall Pet Shop - Continuous
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Winnie and Dinah go into the mall and then the pet shop.
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Winnie
Kittens. Let's go.
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Winnie stuffs the money in her pocket.
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Winnie
(uneasy)
Okay.
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dinah
To spend.
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Winnie
What for?
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dinah
What? No, it's yours.
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Winnie
Here.
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Winnie thrusts the money at Dinah.
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dinah
So, kittens first or shopping?
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Dinah waves as his car drives away, then turns to Winnie.
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dinah
Don't forget about your dry cleaning. And you're supposed to call Charlie about the roof, remember? Tell him Saturday's better than Sunday, but not until after 10.
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Mr.Devine
Here you go, girls. Have fun. I'll pick you up at five-thirty in front of Chick-fil-A
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Winnie and Dinah stand outside of Mr.Devine's car. He hands them both a $10.
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INT. EXT. The Mall - After School
skaro5 added a new scene titled "EXT. The Mall - After School" on 01/27/2013
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Winnie watches them enter their classroom. The bell rings and Winnie hurries into her classroom.
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gail grayson
An aquamarine's not a gem, though. Not actually. Come on, the bell's going to ring any second!
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Winnie
Mine's an aquamarine. That's what this is.
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Amanda
Mine's a sapphire.
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gail grayson
So, nothing. My birthstone's an emerald. I feel lucky, because what if it was, like, an opal? or a garnet?
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Winnie
So?
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gail grayson
Nothing. It's just... it's not an emerald, that's all.
skaro5 added dialogue in "November" on 01/27/2013 [view]
Winnie
What?
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gail grayson
Is it an emerald? Oh.
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Winnie holds out her hand and Gail steps closer.
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