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“Anas. Anas Swany.”
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Girl Swan
“Ok Anas see you round!”
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Anas
“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”
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From the sidewalk you hear faintly
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Swans
"You wanna hang out sometime"?
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SWANs
“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”
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Girl Swan
“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”
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Anas
“YEAH, I’D LOVE TO.”
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SWANs
“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”
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The swans all look at each other and then one says
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Anas
“Anas. Anas Swany!”
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Anas
“I’m Anas. I’ve gone here since freshmen year.”
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Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering.
fabio18 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering
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Swan Girl
“Ok Anas see you round!”
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SWANS
“Hey man, I haven’t seen you around here, do you go to school here?”
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The swans all go over and surround Anas.
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Anas
FROM THE SIDEWALK YOU HEAR FAINTLY“HEY MOM! MOM! I HAVE SOMETHING TO TELL YOU!”
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Girl Swan
“I don’t know, but he’s cute.”
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One of the girl swans says
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From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”
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SWan 1
“Hey look at that guy, who’s that?!”
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One of the Swans turns and taps the others on the shoulder.
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He then stops and thinks in his head“I’m don’t look like them, and I don’t act like them. I’m not cool like them.”
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V.O Anas
“I’m don’t look like them, and I don’t act like them. I’m not cool like them.”
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He then stops and thinks in his head
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Anas then goes from the corner he is watching them from back into the bathroom.
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The camera goes into several different angles of older Anas thinking seriously doing things like sitting on the floor with his hands over his face, rubbing his face, looking at himself in the mirror, and sitting in the ‘thinker’ position in the stall, looking at the ground.
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Anas then whispers to himself“I can’t do this anymore.”Anas then leaves the room and goes out and nervously approaches the ‘swans.’
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FADE TO BLACK
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From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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The swans all look at each other and then one says“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering“I’m Anas. I’ve gone here since freshmen year.”The swans all look at each other and then one says“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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The swans all go over and surround Anas.“Hey man, I haven’t seen you around here, do you go to school here?”Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering“I’m Anas. I’ve gone here since freshmen year.”The swans all look at each other and then one says“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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One of the girl swans says“I don’t know, but he’s cute.”
fabio18 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
One of the girl swans says“I don’t know, but he’s cute.”The swans all go over and surround Anas.“Hey man, I haven’t seen you around here, do you go to school here?”Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering“I’m Anas. I’ve gone here since freshmen year.”The swans all look at each other and then one says“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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One of the Swans turns and taps the others on the shoulder“Hey look at that guy, who’s that?!”One of the girl swans says“I don’t know, but he’s cute.”The swans all go over and surround Anas.“Hey man, I haven’t seen you around here, do you go to school here?”Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering“I’m Anas. I’ve gone here since freshmen year.”The swans all look at each other and then one says“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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He then stops and thinks in his head“I’m don’t look like them, and I don’t act like them. I’m not cool like them.”One of the Swans turns and taps the others on the shoulder“Hey look at that guy, who’s that?!”One of the girl swans says“I don’t know, but he’s cute.”The swans all go over and surround Anas.“Hey man, I haven’t seen you around here, do you go to school here?”Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering“I’m Anas. I’ve gone here since freshmen year.”The swans all look at each other and then one says“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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Anas then whispers to himself“I can’t do this anymore.”Anas then leaves the room and goes out and nervously approaches the ‘swans.’He then stops and thinks in his head“I’m don’t look like them, and I don’t act like them. I’m not cool like them.”One of the Swans turns and taps the others on the shoulder“Hey look at that guy, who’s that?!”One of the girl swans says“I don’t know, but he’s cute.”The swans all go over and surround Anas.“Hey man, I haven’t seen you around here, do you go to school here?”Anas looks up startled, obviously was still in thought, and says stuttering“I’m Anas. I’ve gone here since freshmen year.”The swans all look at each other and then one says“So do you wanna hang out sometime?”Anas still stuttering responds“Yeah, I’d love to.”The Swans walk away laughing and talking and one girl calls back“See you round! Hey! What’s your name?”Anas turns proudly and says“Anas. Anas Swany!”The girl yells back“Ok Anas see you round!”Anas walks out of the school with a smile on his face and marches out of the school.He runs home and bursts through the door. From the sidewalk you hear faintly“Hey Mom! MOM! I have something to tell you!”FADE TO BLACK
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