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926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. 926354 made 47 other changes.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
In his room, Thatcher falls eagerly onto his bed and pulls the covers all the way up to his chin. He rolls over and stares at the wall, his eyes full of nothing. His face scrunches up into a grimace and tears fall from both of his eyes.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Bright laughter erupts from Aria as she opens another present, pulling out a cat coloring book. Thatcher watches her and his face genuinely breaks out into a small smile as her face lights up with excitement. Thatcher almost looks happy.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Angry, Charlotte rolls her eyes and leads her little brother out of the house. Thatcher watches them go and then goes into his room.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
This is Aria's last present and the tired mothers begin to round up their kids so they can leave. Some kids don't want to leave and their mothers have to grab their arms and pull them out the door.
926354 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Charlotte
That present's from me. I really hope she likes it.
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A boy, Thatcher, 16, stands against the wall with his hands in his pockets. His face is devoid of all emotion as he watches the little kids run around, blue cake smeared across each of their small faces. Purple balloons are tied to each chair.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
In his room, Thatcher falls eagerly onto his bed and pulls the covers all the way up to his chin. He rolls over and stares at the wall, his eyes full of sadness. His face scrunches up into a grimace and tears fall from both of his eyes.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Angry, Charlotte rolls her eyes and leads her little brother out of the house. Thatcher watches them go and then goes into his room so that he won't have to clean up the mess that the kids caused.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
In his room, Thatcher falls eagerly onto his bed and pulls the covers all the way up to his chin.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Angry, Charlotte rolls her eyes and leads her little brother out of the house. Thatcher watches them go and then goes into his room to escape having to clean up the mess that the kids caused.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Angry, Charlotte rolls her eyes and leads her little brother out of the house.
926354 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
thatcher
I'll alert my mother. I'm sure she will be most pleased that you're leaving.
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charlotte
I guess we're leaving.
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Charlotte, still beside Thatcher, moves to grab her little brother as he tries to run by her.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
This is Aria's last present and tired mothers begin to round up their kids so they can leave. Some kids don't want to leave and their mothers have to grab their arms and pull them out the door.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Bright laughter erupts from Aria as she opens another present, pulling out a cat coloring book. Thatcher watches her and his face genuinely breaks out into a small smile as her face lights up with excitement.
926354 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
thatcher (cont.)
I'm just being honest.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Bright laughter erupts from Aria as she opens another present, pulling out a cat coloring book. Thatcher's face genuinely breaks out into a small smile as her face lights up with excitement.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Bright laughter erupts from Aria as she opens another present, pulling out a cat coloring book.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Thatcher gives her the brightest smile he can muster, but it doesn't quite reach his eyes.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Thatcher gives her the brightest smile he can muster, but it doesn't quite reach his eyes.
926354 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
thatcher
I'm not.
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thatcher
Cool. Then he's the luckiest little boy here.
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Charlotte
Why are you being mean?
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thatcher
Cool. He's the luckiest little boy here.
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Charlotte
hi.
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Charlotte looks stunned. She opens and closes her mouth a few times before finally answering.
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A girl near Thatcher's age, Charlotte, walks up to him, a concerned look on her face.
926354 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Charlotte
That present's from me. I hope she likes it.
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thatcher
I'm sure she will. She loves getting presents from people she doesn't know.
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taylor
That present's from me. I hope she likes it.
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A girl, Taylor, near Thatcher's age walks up to him, a concerned look on her face.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A girl near Thatcher's age walks up to him, a concerned look on her face.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A boy, Thatcher, 16, stands against the wall with his hands in his pockets. His face is devoid of emotion as he watches the little kids run around, blue cake smeared across each of their small faces. Purple balloons are tied to each chair.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A girl near Thatcher's age, 16
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Excited laughter fills the room as Thatcher's mother announces that it's time to open presents. Aria bounces over and giddily rips open a blue box with a green bow on it.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Aria skips away happily and grabs another piece of cake from the table. Thatcher's smile drops as soon as she turns her back, his vacant eyes staring at the brown floor.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Excited laughter fills the room as Thatcher's mother announces that it's time to open presents. Aria bounces over and giddily rips open a blue box with a green bow on it. She pulls out
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Aria skips away happily. Thatcher's smile drops as soon as she turns her back, his vacant eyes staring at the brown floor.
926354 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Aria
Yes! I'm four now!
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Thatcher
Hey, sis. Are you having fun?
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A little girl runs up to Thatcher. He smiles at her.
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A boy, Thatcher, stands against the wall with his hands in his pockets. His face is devoid of emotion as he watches the little kids run around, blue cake smeared across each of their small faces. Purple balloons are tied to each chair.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A little girl runs up to Thatcher. He smiles at her
926354 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A boy, Thatcher, stands against the wall with his hands in his pockets. His face is devoid of emotion as he watches the little kids run around, blue cake smeared across each of their small faces.
926354 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A boy, Thatcher, stands against the wall with his hands in his pockets. His face is devoid of emotion as he watches the little kids run around.
926354 added a slugline in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
INT. Int. dining room - day
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