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This is your first scene. Last edited by cannotremember, 10 months ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

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Dissolve

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Val's rocket is zooming through the heavens.

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Dissolve

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INt val's rocket

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Val is guiding her spacecraft with precision.

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A beep goes off on her control panel.

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(The radar display is moving)

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Val grabs the telecommunicator.

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valerie Vega

Earth Patrol, this is Valerie Vega, come in Earth Patrol. (pause) Yes, I read you Earth Patrol. I believe I've located Empress Nefaria's Robot Controlled Armada. (Pause) That's right. I'm moving to intercept. No more will humans, or any other sentient beings feel fear from these atroctious autonomous

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dissolve

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ext. space - val's rocket

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Val's rocket changes course and zooms off.

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Dissolve

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meanwhile...

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EXT outside the plutonian juvinelle detention agency

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Ruby is an 18 year old Mercurian woman has just been released from the detention center. Ruby looks like she stepped out of THE VIOLENT YEARS, FASTER PUSSYCAT KILL KILL or some other girl gang picture.

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Examining her surroundings, Ruby realizes she has no way to get off this rock and that makes her more angry than she already was already feeling. And let me tell you, Ruby was already very angry to begin with.

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Her salvation arrives in a flying car overhead. Using her suitcase, Ruby uses the old school hitchhiking method - she props a leg up on the suitcase to show off one of her gams.

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The flying car takes notices, changes it's heading and lands next to her.

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Driver

Hey sweetie, you need a lift somewhere?

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Ruby

I sure do big boy.

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dissolve

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INT the flying car

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Now in space, Ruby and the Driver begin to chat.

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driver

So, where ya headed?

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Ruby

Earth.

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Driver

Funny, I didn't take you for an Earthling. You look more...

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Ruby

You can say it, Mercurian.

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driver

(Nervous laugh) Yea, that's right. Well I'm going as far as Jupiter.

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Ruby

That's fine, mac.

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driver

So, you were in a little bit of trouble I guess huh?

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ruby

What makes you say that?

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Driver

Well, standing outside the Juvie Center was kinda a clue I suppose.

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ruby

Nothing slips past you does it?

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driver

What were you in for?

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ruby

Nothing really. Judge had it out for me. Shoplifting, disturbing the peace, attempted genocide.

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driver

Attempted what?!

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ruby

I was just having fun with a thermo particle bomb and the judge went nuts over it.

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driver

Look, I'm not so sure this is a good idea...

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ruby

You got any smokes? I'd kill for one.

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driver

Oh wow you have been out of circulation for a bit haven't you?

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ruby

90 days.

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driver

Well that's nothing!

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ruby

90 Plutoninan days.

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Driver

Ohhhhh. Well, a couple months back Earth banned tobacco and since you can only get tobacco on earth...that pretty much sealed the deal. No one smokes thanks to Valerie Vega.

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ruby

(instantly tense) Why did you say that name?

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driver

Valerie Vega?

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Ruby

YES!

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Driver

Well she was the one that petitioned really hard to get all sentient beings to quit smoking. And what with her being an intergalactic hero and pretty much the most famous human in the galaxy, everyone did.

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ruby

Valerie Vega...

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drive

Don't tell me you never heard of Vega.

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Ruby

Oh no, I'm very aware of Val. She's the one that busted me...took away the best months of my life.

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Driver

(laughing nervously) Why don't I let you off here? Neptune is real nice and..and I'll give you some cash. You can take a turbo bus to earth?

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ruby

I thought we were becoming best friends.

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driver

It's just..I don't want to get involved in anything here. You got beef with Earth, that's your business.

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ruby

Well we're on the same exact wavelength actually. I don't want you to get involved in anything either, jack.

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Ruby pulls out a knife

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ruby

Looks like it's time for you to become uninvolved fella.

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dissolve

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EXT Space Val vs the Robot Saucers

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A few hit her ship back, but the hull is holding.

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We intercut between shots of Val piloting and exterior shots of Val's rocket zooming and shooting.

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When the last saucer is destroyed Val picks up the televisio device.

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valerie Vega

Earth Patrol, Valerie Vega here, the Nefaria's robotic menace has been destroyed. The free people of the universe can once again breath a sigh of relief for now, but I fear this respite is only temporary. The Evil Empress Nefaria is still out there...somewhere. One day, I'll discover the location of her hidden base and then...I'll finish this once and for all.

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Val hangs up the communicator.

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