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cannotremember deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago. cannotremember made 83 other changes.
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valerie Vega
One day Nefaria, I'll discover the location of your secret base and then...we can end this once and for all.
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valerie Vega
Earth Patrol, Valerie Vega here, the Nefaria's robotic menace has been destroyed. The free people of the universe can once again breath a sigh of relief for now, but I fear this respite is only temporary. The Evil Empress Nefaria is still out there...somewhere. One day, I'll discover the location of her hidden base and then...I'll finish this once and for all.
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Val hangs up the communicator.
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valerie Vega
One day Nefaria, I'll discover the location of your secret base and then...we can end this once and for all.
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INT. Val hangs up the communicator.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
valerie Vega
Earth Patrol, Valerie Vega here, the Nefaria's robotic menace has been destroyed. The free people of the universe can once again breath a sigh of relief for now.
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When the last saucer is destroyed...
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We intercut between shots of Val piloting and exterior shots of Val's rocket zooming and shooting.
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A few hit her ship back, but the hull is holding.
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EXT Space Val vs the Robot Saucers
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Ruby
Oh no, I'm very aware of Val. She's the one that busted me...took away the best months of my life.
cannotremember inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
drive
Don't tell me you never heard of Vega.
cannotremember inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
Valerie Vega...
cannotremember inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
Driver
Well she was the one that petitioned really hard to get all sentient beings to quit smoking. And what with her being an intergalactic hero and pretty much the most famous human in the galaxy, everyone did.
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Ruby
YES!
cannotremember inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
Valerie Vega?
cannotremember edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
(instantly tense)
Why did you say that name?
cannotremember edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
Driver
Ohhhhh. Well, a couple months back Earth banned tobacco and since you can only get tobacco on earth...that pretty much sealed the deal. No one smokes thanks to Valerie Vega.
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INT. dissolve
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ruby
Looks like it's time for you to become uninvolved fella.
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INT. Ruby pulls out a knife
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ruby
Well we're on the same exact wavelength actually. I don't want you to get involved in anything either, jack.
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driver
It's just..I don't want to get involved in anything here. You got beef with Earth, that's your business.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
I thought we were becoming best friends.
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Driver
(laughing nervously)
Why don't I let you off here? Neptune is real nice and..and I'll give you some cash. You can take a turbo bus to earth?
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ruby
Unbelievable. Damn humans. The universe would be so much better without them.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
Driver
Yeah it was
cannotremember edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
Driver
Ohhhhh. Well, a couple months back Earth banned tobacco and since you can only get tobacco on earth...that pretty much sealed the deal.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
Unbelievable.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
Driver
Ohhhhh. Well, a couple months back Earth banned tobacco sales and since you can only get tobacco on earth...that pretty much sealed the deal.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
90 Plutoninan days.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
Well that's nothing!
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
90 days.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
Oh wow you have been out of circulation for a bit haven't you?
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
You got any smokes? I'd kill for one.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
Look, I'm not so sure this is a good idea...
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
I was just having fun with a thermo particle bomb and the judge went nuts over it.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
Attempted what?!
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
Nothing really. Judge had it out for me. Shoplifting, disturbing the peace, attempted genocide.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
What were you in for?
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
Nothing slips past you does it?
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
Driver
Well, standing outside the Juvie Center was kinda a clue I suppose.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
ruby
What makes you say that?
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
So, you were in a little bit of trouble I guess huh?
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
Ruby
That's fine, mac.
cannotremember added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago [view]
driver
(Nervous laugh)
Yea, that's right. Well I'm going as far as Jupiter.
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