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Quick pitch

A man running away from a search patrol and watchdogs hides.
Bobby comes home to find his wife Tracy crying. She tells Bobby that they're still not pregnant, but if she had a baby, she wants to raise the child in a safe environment. Bobby agrees that they should move and they prepare for a dinner they are hosting. Their friends, Scott and Meryl tell the couple about a place called the Commons: beautiful homes, secure environment, and a welcoming neighborhood. Meryl notes that when she announced she would not be having a second child with Scott, they "lost interest". Bobby is hesitant; Tracy, however, is ecstatic so Bobby agrees to check out the Commons.

Project Type: Short Film (An hour)

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Sweetzyl joined the project! on 08/07/2013. more
emiliano1954 added a slugline in "Their friends..." on 08/06/2013. emiliano1954 made 8 other changes. more
INT. int. home. day.
emiliano1954 edited the scene titled "A man running away from a search patrol and watchdogs hides." on 08/04/2013. emiliano1954 made 20 other changes. more

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