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chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008. chickenproductions made 27 other changes.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 5: They both are kicking Todd when Joey stabs Tim in the back. Tim falls over, takes the knife, and stabs Joey in the leg. Joey falls down and Tim stabs him in the chest.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 4: Todd catches up to Tim. Tim punches him in the face and Todd spits out blood. Tim continues to beat the weakened Todd. Tim kicks Todd onto his back.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 3: Tim sees Todd hiding the body. He picks up a plank. He comes over and hits Todd over the head. Todd falls down grabbing his head as Tim runs away. Joey's body twitches in the background.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 2: Todd hides around a corner. As Joey goes past, Todd tackles him and starts to beat him up. Joey throws him off, and they both get up. Fight ensues, and then Todd kicks Joey in the groin. Joey is in a lot of pain, falls over. Todd drags him into nearby bushes and starts to put stuff over him.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd is running looks over his shoulder and sees Joey getting up. Todd cuts through buildings and streets to try to escape joey.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 1: Todd gets up from sitting on the stairs. Joey try's to tackle him, but Todd turns around and throws Joey to the ground. todd runs away. Joey gets back up and chases him.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 4: They both are kicking Todd when Joey stabs Tim in the back. Tim falls over, takes the knife, and stabs Joey in the leg. Joey falls down and Tim stabs him in the chest.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 3: Todd catches up to Tim. Tim punches him in the face and Todd spits out blood. Tim continues to beat the weakened Todd. Tim kicks Todd onto his back.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 1:Todd gets up from sitting on the stairs. Joey try's to tackle him, but Todd turns around and throws Joey to the ground. todd runs away. Joey gets back up and chases him.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 2: Tim sees Todd hiding the body. He picks up a plank. He comes over and hits Todd over the head. Todd falls down grabbing his head as Tim runs away. Joey's body twitches in the background.
chickenproductions deleted an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd hides around a corner. As Joey goes past, Todd tackles him and starts to beat him up. Joey throws him off, and they both get up. Fight ensues, and then Todd kicks Joey in the groin. Joey is in a lot of pain, falls over. Todd drags him into nearby bushes and starts to put stuff over him.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd is running looks over his shoulder and sees Joey getting up. Todd cuts through buildings and streets.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd gets up from sitting on the stairs. Joey try's to tackle him, but Todd turns around and throws Joey to the ground. todd runs away. Joey gets back up and chases him.
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Wide shot of all three dead on the ground. Each person comes up with a narration for the end.
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
They both are kicking Todd when Joey stabs Tim in the back. Tim falls over, takes the knife, and stabs Joey in the leg. Joey falls down and Tim stabs him in the chest.
chickenproductions added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
JOEY
Nice job man!
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Joey comes back.
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd catches up to Tim. Tim punches him in the face and Todd spits out blood. Tim continues to beat the weakened Todd. Tim kicks Todd onto his back.
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Tim sees Todd hiding the body. He picks up a plank. He comes over and hits Todd over the head. Todd falls down grabbing his head as Tim runs away. Joey's body twitches in the background.
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
They go through buildings and streets until Todd hides around a corner. As Joey goes past, Todd tackles him and starts to beat him up. Joey throws him off, and they both get up. Fight ensues, and then Todd kicks Joey in the groin. Joey is in a lot of pain, falls over. Todd drags him into nearby bushes and starts to put stuff over him.
chickenproductions edited the scene titled "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd gets up and runs away. Joey almost catches him when Todd turns around and throws Joey to the ground. Joey gets back up and chases him.
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd gets up and runs away. Joey almost catches him when Todd turns around and throws Joey to the ground. Joey gets back up and chases him. They go through buildings and streets until Todd hides around a corner. As Joey goes past, Todd tackles him and starts to beat him up. Joey throws him off, and they both get up. Fight ensues, and then Todd kicks Joey in the groin. Joey is in a lot of pain, falls over. Todd drags him into nearby bushes. Tim sees this.
chickenproductions added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
JOEY
You!!!!!
chickenproductions added an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Joey busts out of the door with Todd at the bottom of the steps.
chickenproductions edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
EXT. Outside of Jacinto BuildingDaytime
chickenproductions added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
EXT. Scene 1Daytime
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