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chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008. chickenproductions made 21 other changes.
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Fight 5: They both start kicking Todd. Joey sees a knife in Tim's pocket. Joey takes it and stabs Tim in the back. Tim falls over, takes the knife, and stabs Joey in the leg. Joey falls down and Tim stabs him in the chest.
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Joey
Ok, well I'll check it out. Thanks for the heads up.
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Tim
Just saying, it didn't look like too small of a fight...
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Joey
Ummm... ok... siblings do have little fights you know...
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Tim
You should ask your brother about Sarah, they were getting pretty ugly back there.
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Tim keeps walking after his encounter with Todd. He sees Joey just after.
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INT. Outside BuldingDay
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Joey
OUT!!!!!!
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Todd
I didn't do it, I swear...
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Joey
She was OUR sister!!! Not just mine, but yours too? How could you do it, why would you do it? If I see you again, I'll kill you, just get out..
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Todd
Joey... its not how it looks...
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Joey (short breathed)
Sarah... Todd?
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Todd walks into te building and sees the girl lying on the ground. He brings her into his arms, crying. He looks over at the knife and picks it up vengefully. Joey walks in then.
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Todd
Get out of here you creep.
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Tim
How's your sister?
(he smirks)
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Tim has just killed a girl and she is laying on the floor. He smiles and places the knife near her body. He cleans off the handle to get rid of fingerprints and walks away. Outside the building he sees Todd.
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This scene is shot at weird angles, and maybe with some gels. A black and white in editing could be added too...
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INT. Public PlaceDay
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chickenproductions edited the scene titled "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008
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