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chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008. chickenproductions made 20 other changes.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Joey walks up to see Tim standing over Todd.
chickenproductions inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Tim continues to beat the weakened Todd. Tim kicks Todd onto his back.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 4: Todd catches up to Tim. Tim punches him in the face and Todd spits out blood.
chickenproductions inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Tim
Once this is all over, no one will ever know.
chickenproductions deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
JOEY
Nice job man!
chickenproductions inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd gets up, looks back at Joey, and sighs. He runs after Tim with determination.
chickenproductions inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
As Tim runs away. Joey's body twitches in the background.
chickenproductions inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd
Your not going to get away with this, first her, now him?
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 3: Tim sees Todd hiding the body. He picks up a plank. He comes over and hits Todd over the head. Todd falls down grabbing his head...
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd drags him into nearby bushes and starts to cover him in the dirt.
chickenproductions inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd
I didn't want this to happen...
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight ensues, and then Todd kicks Joey in the groin. Joey is in a lot of pain, falls over.
chickenproductions inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Joey
I cannot bring her back, but I can get rid of you!
chickenproductions inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Joey throws him off, and they both get up.
chickenproductions inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd
Let... IT... GO!! She's gone, and there's nothing we can do.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 2: Todd hides around a corner. As Joey goes past, Todd tackles him and starts to beat him up.
chickenproductions edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd
I ...didn't... do it. Let... it... go.
chickenproductions inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd runs away. Joey gets back up and chases him.
chickenproductions inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Todd
I ...didn't... do it.
chickenproductions edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/21/2008 [view]
Fight 1: Todd gets up from sitting on the stairs. Joey try's to tackle him, but Todd turns around and throws Joey to the ground.
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