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elevator Last edited by Madmax627, on 05/21/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

Int. elevator - Night

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A man and a woman enter an elevator. As the elevator is going down it all of a sudden comes to a stop.

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Doug

What the hell just happened?

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Susie

The elevator broke down. Don't worry it happens all the time.

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Doug starts to frantically push the emergency button. Nothing happens so he starts trying to open the doors by hand.

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Susie (CONT'D)

That isn't going to work man, we are going to be in here for a while so you should just chill out and relax.

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Doug

This is bullshit, I was on my way to the bars with my friends for New Years Eve and now I'm stuck in this run down apartment's elevator.

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Doug sits down next to Susie

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Doug (CONT'D)

So you live here? That sucks.

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Susie

Screw you, what were you doing in here if its such a crappy place to be.

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doug

I was pregaming at my buddies place before we went out. Saving money, oh ya, who wants me on their corporate team?

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susie

You drink with your friends, before you go out drinking with your friends? Sounds like an alcoholic to me.

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Doug

Whatever, what were you doing that was so sophisticated before this?

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susie

If you have to know I was baking a chicken pot pie.

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doug

Oh nice chicken pot pie, my three favorite things.

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Susie

Your so immature.

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Susie gets up and sits down on the other side of the elevator, away from Doug.

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Ext. On the street - Night

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A firefighter is looking up at the apartment building when another fire fighter is approaching him.

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Firefighter #1

So what's the deal here?

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Firefighter #2

Apparently two people are stuck in the elevator of this building.

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Firefighter #1

When the hell is the city just gonna knock this building down to the ground. It's just an eye sore to this neighborhood

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Firefighter #2

Well we can't knock it down when their are people trapped inside, so how about we save them, then you can go give your petition to city hall about the building being an eye sore, okay chief?

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Int. elevator - Night

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Susie still is sitting in the opposite corner from Doug, trying to ignore him.

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Doug

Honestly girl, I don't even know your name but I think you need to go to a doctor to get that stick removed from your anus.

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Susie

I'm Susie and I don't have a stick up my ass, I just find you immature and annoying.

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Doug

Well I'm Doug and it's nice to meet you.

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Susie

Ya well I'm not glad I met you. I just want to be back in my apartment with Jacob eating my pie.

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Doug

Okay Susie, I'm sorry. If we are going to be stuck in this elevator for a while we may as well get along. Maybe I could get buy you a drink afterwards.

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Susie stands up quickly, flustered

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Susie

Are you hitting on me?

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doug

No I'm not hitting on you I was just wondering if you wanted to get a drink after, maybe do some blow and drop a little acid. Maybe after you could call your mom up and we could have a little three way.

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Susie

Excuse me?

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Doug

I'm kidding, but seriously wanna get a drink after?

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Susie

The chances of me getting a drink with you are about as good as us being rescued in the next five seconds.

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The doors to the elevator open and a fireman is hanging from a rope

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Fireman #1

Hey guys I'm here to get you out of this elevator.

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Doug looks over with a smirk at Susie

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Doug

So about that drink and your mom.....

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Doug (CONT'D)

Let me guess, Jacob is your dog.

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Susie

He's not my dog you idiot. He's my cat

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Doug

Oh wow you call me an alcoholic but i would way rather be that, then the freaky cat lady of the building.

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Susie

Honestly it's people like you that make me hate our kind.

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