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This is your first scene. Last edited by saviaj, on 07/23/2008. 0 comments. More scene info.

INT. FARMER'S MARKET — DAY

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DREW and JANIE meet in the Farmer's market. Actually she picks up a grapefruit and the whole pile goes tumbling to the floor. Janie tries to back away, but Drew is standing across the way trying not to laugh. He bursts out laughing and she looks pathetic.

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DREW

Where are you going, Calamity Jane?

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JANIE

No where.

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He helps her pick up the grapefruit. They bump heads. He kisses her. They bump heads.

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DREW

I'm Drew.

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JANIE

Janie.

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DREW

Oh, I was close.

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They look at each other googly eyed. He kisses her.

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JANIE

Um....that was forward.

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DREW

Yeah, I kind of thought this could be our first date.

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She looks down at her yoga get up.

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JANIE

I would have liked to have worn something cute.

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He looks at her derriere wiggling around as she picks up grapefruit.

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DREW

What you have on is real cute.

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She turns her head to see him staring at her bum.

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JANIE

Ah, that's just lovely.

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DREW

What do you say we get out of here and get some muffins.

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JANIE

I really need to grab a shower.

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DREW

Have it your way. We can have our first date in the shower.

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A little put off. She starts to walk away.

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JANIE

I'm going to finish my shopping now.

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He watches her go. Non plussed. In his designer jeans and touchable sweater and perfectly coifed hair.

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DREW

Fine, but everytime you knock over a display, I get to ask you out again.

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EXT. FARMERS MARKET — DAY

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Janie walks out and Drew is standing outside waiting for her. She smiles and walks over to him peering into his lone paper bag. There's bagels, bananas, yogurt, cream cheesse and orange juice in there.

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DREW

Have breakfast with me.

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JANIE

Why not?

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EXT. PARK — DAY

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Janie and Drew are picnicing under a tree -- just chatting and laughing. Drew gets up and starts immitating the Korean tai chi ladies. Janie gets up and starts doing some complicated yoga moves. Drew looks intimidated. She starts trying to put him poses. He's not very flexible. Hilarity ensues.

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Lunch turns mild shopping, which turns into dinner, which turns into walking Janie home.

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EXT. JANIE'S FLAT — NIGHT

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Janie and Drew stand there awkwardly. His hands are in his pocket, her arms are crossed across her chest. They both sway and fidget.

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DREW

Awkward.

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JANIE

I had a good time today.

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DREW

Yeah, me too.

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They both look around.

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DREW (CONT'D)

Should we kiss. Should we not kiss? Why do you make me so nervous?

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She rushes over to him and kisses him passionately, then slows down a bit cradling his face in her hands.

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JANIE

Call me.

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DREW

Okay.

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She writes her number on his arm.

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JANIE

Tomorrow.

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Drew.

Okay.

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She walks up the steps. He turns to go, takes a few steps then turns and rushes up to her as if he forgot something.

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DREW

Oh, yeah.

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He kisses her again. She smiles and keys into her apartment.

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JANIE

Goodnight.

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DREW

Goodnight.

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He walks away with a smile on his face. He walks down the street, turns the corner and gets hit by a Bonneville. He lays in the street. The Bonneville pauses and then screeches off.

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DREW FIGHTS FOR HIS LIFE Last edited by saviaj, on 07/24/2008. 0 comments. More scene info.

INT. EMERGENCY ROOM — NIGHT

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Doctor's work on Drew frantically. He's bleeding everywhere.

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DOCTOR #1

He's crashing. Start CPR.

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A doctor starts chest compressions.

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INT. BATHROOM — NIGHT

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Janie draws a bath.

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