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saviaj added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 07/23/2008. saviaj made 28 other changes.
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EXT. FARMERS MARKETDAY
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DREW
Fine, but everytime you knock over a display, I get to ask you out again.
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A little put off. She starts to walk away.
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DREW
Fine, but everytime you knock over a display I get to ask you out again.
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He watches her go. Non plussed. In his designer jeans and touchable sweater and perfectly coifed hair.
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JANIE
I'm going to finish my shopping now.
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She starts to walk away.
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DREW
Have it your way. We can have our first date in the shower.
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JANIE
I really need to grab a shower.
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DREW
What do you say we get out of here and get some muffins.
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JANIE
Ah, that's just lovely.
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She turns her head to see him staring at her bum.
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DREW
What you have on is real cute.
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He looks at her derriere wiggling around as she picks up grapefruit.
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JANIE
I would have liked to have worn something cute.
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She looks down at her yoga get up.
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DREW
Yeah, I kind of thought this could be our first date.
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JANIE
Um....that was forward.
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They look at each other googly eyed. He kisses her.
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DREW
Oh, I was close.
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JANIE
Janie.
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DREW
I'm Drew.
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He helps her pick up the grapefruit. They bump heads. He kisses her. They bump heads.
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DREW and JANIE meet in the Farmer's market. Actually she picks up a grapefruit and the whole pile goes tumbling to the floor. Janie tries to back away, but Drew is standing across the way trying not to laugh. He bursts out laughing and she looks pathetic.
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JANIE
No where.
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DREW
Where are you going, Calamity Jane?
saviaj edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 07/23/2008 [view]
DREW and JANIE meet in the Farmer's market. Actually she picks up a grapefruit and the whole pile goes tumbling to the floor. Janie tries to back away, but Drew is standing across the way trying not to laugh. He bursts out laughing and she looks pathetic. He helps her pick up the grapefruit. They bump heads. He kisses her.
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DREW and JANIE
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