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Flynny2612 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/25/2009. Flynny2612 made 13 other changes. more
Logan walks out without looking back. Frannie sits at the table watches him get in his car and drive away.
Flynny2612 inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/25/2009. Flynny2612 made 10 other changes. more
The waitress rolls her eyes and walks away. Logan ends the awkwardness between the waitress and Frannie by bringing up a new topic.
Flynny2612 inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/16/2009. Flynny2612 made 27 other changes. more
Logan gets up and walks out of the diner.
Flynny2612 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2009. Flynny2612 made 2 other changes. more
Frannie is at the diner where she works. The inside is smoky and dimly lit. It is a diner that is substantial in length rather than width. The tables are all lined up one right after another. Adorned with fake burgundy leather, the booths are crammed in, but the lighting and sporadic location of the people inside allows everyone present to be alienated from everyone else. There are a few older men inside, but they have no connection or interaction with each other. They only talk to the waitress running around in her turquoise collared dress that is the diner's uniform. Frannie is sitting down at a table despite the bustle of the other waitress. She is sitting facing away from the front door as she stares down the long main road outside. Logan walks into the diner. He is average height and weight with straight brown hair. Overall he looks approachable and friendly, but with a slight look of anxiety in his eyes. He walks into the front door which is all the way to the right of the building. When he comes in there is a short bar area in front of the kitchen. He turns left and continues down the first ailse of seating. He has an obvious destination. He approaches Frannie and then sits down across from her.
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Logan
I'm not sure. I have a big case coming up, so my schedule has been all over the place.
 

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