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Zesp added an action in "An Unhappy Ending" two years ago. Zesp made 30 other changes.
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DAISY and ANNA both have ice cream cones and are holding hands, swinging their arms back and forth. DAISY is back in one of her floral print dress
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INT. ext: evening time. outside an icecream shop.
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Zoom on that, fade to black, credits.
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The joke book lays on the floor, forgotten. For now.
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vinny
(shaking his head)
Dunno, kiddo. Dunno.
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anna
(nodding)
What do you think she's gonna do?
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vinny
(leaning next to her, squeezing her next)
I wouldn't bet against that girl. Much tougher than she looks.
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anna
(collaspsing against wall)
If I didn't do that already.
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vinny
Anna-Marie, did. You. See. Her? She wasn't too badly off. I think they just meant to scare her off.
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anna
She was terrified, Vin-
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vinny
(grabbing her by the shoulders, making her stand up straight,tilting up her chin)
Did you see her?
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anna
(exploding rage)
Frank fucking Argentini! One of ours, Vinny! He knew, he knew, this is all my fault...
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vinny
(calm anger)
Who was it?
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VINNY practically kicks down MARKIE's door. He hands DAISY off and MARKIE takes her and shuts the doors in ANNA's face. ANNA starts pacing, furious tears in her eyes, jaw clenching and unclenching.
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VINNY nudges a petrified ANNA out of the way and deadlifts DAISY and gives ANNA 'come with me' nod.
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daisy
(muttering, rocking back-and-forth)
no, no, no, no....
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anna
(softly)
Ms. Daisy, please...
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She goes limp and he sets her down gently. She rushes over to DAISY and goes to touch her, but DAISY flinches back, looking terrified.
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vinny
Anna! Anna!!! Look at him! Look!
(he grabs her chin and forces her to look at the super dead humburger meat body of Frank)
He's finished, Anna. You're done. Stop fighting.
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VINNY comes from nowhere and wraps two giant arms around ANNA'S middle and pulls her off of him. She thrashes and struggles to keep fighting.
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ANNA beats the living hell out of FRANK. First they struggle, then she has him by the shirt collar and punches him repeatedly in the face, while DAISY screams for her to stop, and when she gets bored of that, she kicks him. She keeps beating on him, and DAISY get's this terrified look on her face and cowars in the corner. ANNA keeps landing hits even though he's very dead.
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He doesn't get another word in. Bye, Frank.
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frank
What, you know this-
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anna
Yeah, I-
(she sees the girl)
(brokenly)
Daisy?!
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Frank
Anna-Marie, right?
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anna
Damn, Frank?
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She steps forward threateningly and he looks back and she stops.
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frank
How'sa 'bout you mind your own business, bitch?
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anna
Hey, asshole, how 'bout you let the girl go.
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ANNA is walking along in her badass getup, and she hears sounds of a struggle. She frowns and follow it to an alley, where there's a man beating up a girl. ANNA pulls on brass knuckles.
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