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jessicavee added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/10/2011. jessicavee made 31 other changes.
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Ellen puts her remaining clothespins in the pocket of her apron and picks up the empty laundry basket. She pauses as she heads toward the house and looks down at the mud where Susan was playing. In the mud, Susan has drawn two dead looking people, their eyes as x's.
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Ellen turns her back to Susan while she finishes up hanging to laundry.
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Susan
No. I want to go home.
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Ellen
Victor. Shall I get him?
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Susan
What's his name?
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Ellen
None come to mind right now but my son might have one for you. Would you like to meet him? He's just inside finishing lunch. He's about your age.
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Susan
Helena? She was a Pollack. Terrible English. She didn't like it here one bit. Said it rained to much. I said, you moved to the swamp! What'd you think? But she was miserable. She didn't know any jokes. Do you know any jokes?
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Susan
Helena? She was a Pollack. Terrible English. She didn't like it here one bit. Said it rained to much. I said, you moved to the swamp! What'd you think? But she was miserable.
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Ellen
What do you know of the last lady who worked here?
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Susan squats in the wet dirt near Ellen. She picks up a stick and starts drawing in the mud. Ellen continues to hang the laundry.
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Susan
What's it to her? I do as I please, I said.
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Susan
What's it to her? I do as I please, I said.
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Ellen
Oh, you'll come to like it, I'm certain. I'm sure it'd break your mother's heart to lose the name she'd given you.
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Susan
It's an ugly name! I hate it! I'm going to get it changed when I get older.
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Ellen
That's a lovely name. I had a friend named Susan when I was a little girl.
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girl
Susan.
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Ellen
Ellen.
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GIRL
What's yours?
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Ellen
You do? What's your name?
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girl
Why not? I do as I please.
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Girl
Over past that thicket.
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Ellen
Do you live nearby?
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Girl
Who do you think? That last lady! But it's OK. I didn't like talking to her much. I couldn't understand her with that accent.
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eLLEN
Who?
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girl
She'd been talking a lot about leaving but I didn't think she meant it. She complained a lot. But if you're here I guess that means she's gone.
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Ellen
(Clutching her chest)
Good Lord, you startled me! Where did you come from?
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Ellen is startled at the voice behind her. She whirls around to find a little blonde girl standing there.
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voice
So she did up and leave, eh?
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Ellen is hanging clothes and linens on the line.
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INT. EXT. backyard
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