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This is your first scene. Last edited by Sandym651, on 03/28/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

SCENE 1. Ext. Day

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A BOX IS SHOWN FLOATING DOWN A RIVER UNTIL IT GETS CAUGHT ON SOME BRANCHES. A HIKER NOTICES THE BOX AND GOES TO PICK IT UP. ONCE HE PICKS IT UP AND LOOKS INSIDE, HE GOES INTO SHOCK.

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SCENE 2. INT. CAR DAY

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3 MEN ARE SHOWN SITTING IN CONVERSATION. THE SCENE STARTS WHILE THEY ARE ALREADY DEEP INTO TALKING ABOUT SOMETHING.

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Oliver

So how long do you expect this whole thing to take?

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Clive

3...maybe 4 hours? Depending on what kind of mood he's in. But he'll give in after not too long.

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Oliver

And what about the police?

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CLive

I wouldn't worry about them.

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Oliver

Why Not?

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Clive

Duncan's never really been their biggest fan, he won't want them involved.

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Clive (CONT'D)

Are we all ready now?

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INT. DAY APARTMENT

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A WOMAN IS SHOWN SITTING ALONE IN HER APARTMENT. SHE CHECKS THE TIME. AND TURNS ON THE TV

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Ext. THE 3 MEN ARE SHOWN IN AN APARTMENT BUILDING.

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Clive (CONT'D)

Ok, Ready on 3

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THE 3 PUT ON MASKS AND PULL OUT WEAPONS

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CLive (CONT'D)

1...2...3!

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The 3 men kICK OPEN THE DOOR

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THE WOMAN INSIDE STARTS SCREAMING AND THE MEN TRY TO RESTRAIN HER AS SHE STRUGGLES.

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CLIVE PULLS UP A CHAIR, AND THE OTHER 2 MEN SIT HER DOWN IN IT AND TIE HER UP.

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CLIVE PICKS UP HER PHONE OFF OF A TABLE AND SCROLLS THROUGH THE CONTACTS.

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Donchi(hostage woman)

WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?!?!

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ONE OF THE GUYS TAPES HER MOUTH SHUT

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clive

You're gonna help us get what we want.

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DONCHI STRUGGLE TO YELL THROUGH HER TAPED MOUTH

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HE THEN DIALS THE PHONE

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INT. DUNCAN ARQUETTE (DONCHI'S DAD'S) HOUSE

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PHONE RINGS, A MAN WALKS INTO THE ROOM AND ANSWERS

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DUNCAN

Hello?

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CLive

Good afternoon, my associates and I would like to be in business with you

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Duncan

Who is this?

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Clive

We have something of yours, and we were wondering if you'd like to buy it back.

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Duncan

What do you have?

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Clive

I think you mean "Who"

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Duncan

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaat?

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CLive

If you want her back bring the contents of your safety deposit box under the Guerrero Street bridge in one hour.

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DUNCAN

BU-

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CLIVE HANGS UP

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Scene 3. INT. DONCHI AND CLIVE SIT AT A TABLE

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THE 2 HAVE A CONVERSATION THAT REVEALS THAT DONCHI IS PLANNING HER OWN KIDNAPPING IN ORDER TO OBTAIN A MYSTERIOUS OBJECT IN HER DAD'S SAFETY DEPOSIT BOX THAT HE WOULD NEVER GIVE TO ANYONE. SHE HIRES CLIVE. WHO KNOWS THAT SHE IS HAVING HERSELF KIDNAPPED, BUT THINKS THAT THEY ONLY WANT MONEY OUT OF THE TRANSACTION, AND HE HIRES 2 OTHER MEN WHO THINK THE KIDNAPPING IS REAL. DONCHI TELLS CLIVE THAT SHE AND HIM WILL GET MORE OF THE MONEY THAN THE OTHER 2.

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Scene 4. Ext.

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THE 4 WAIT UNDER THE BRIDGE FOR DONCHI'S DAD TO SHOW UP. THEY START TALKING ABOUT HOW MUCH OF THE MONEY EACH OF THEM IS GETTING. THEY ARGUE ABOUT WHO DESERVES MORE AND PULL WEAPONS ON EACHOTHER. JUST THEN DUNCAN SHOWS UP. THEY GIVE HIM DONCHI AND HE GIVES THEM THE BOX. THEY NOTICE THERE IS NO ACTUAL MONEY IN IT AND START TO GET ANGRY, UNTIL THEY ALL START LOOKING INSIDE THE SMALL CARDBOARD BOX THAT WAS THE SOLE ITEM IN THE SAFETY DEPOSIT BOX.

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OLIVER

Is that what I think it is?....

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JUST THEN DUNCAN PULLS OUT A GUN AND SHOOTS THE 3 KIDNAPPERS. (No actual violence will be shown and will only be implied.) DONCHI BECOMES INSANELY ANGRY AND RUNS TO THE BOX, SO DOES DUNCAN AND THEY HAVE A STRUGGLE THAT RESULTS IN THE BOX ENDING UP IN THE RIVER, WITHT THE FAST CURRENT TAKING IT AWAY. (it would be way too hard to do, but my first idea is for donchi to go in after the box, be unable to catch up to it and drown)

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THE BOX IS SHOWN FLOATING DOWN THE RIVER UNTIL IT CATCHES ON SOME BRANCHES, A HIKER PICKS IT UP, LOOKS INSIDE AND IS SHOCKED.

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