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MaxK deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010. MaxK made 23 other changes.
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joe
Breakfast of champions.
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MR. Ilyasova
Great answer Sam! I'm really proud of you for having a good attitude in my class.
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sAM
Venus of course! Pluto is the last planet in the solar system!
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Mr. Ilyasova
Sam, pop quiz! Which planet is closer to Earth? Venus or Pluto?
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Mr. Ilyasova paces back and forth in the front of the class and looks at Sam sitting focused in chair.
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INT. INT- CLASSROOM- DAY
MaxK added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
SAM
Yeah Mom, you're right! I've had a really bad attitude lately and I'm going to try hard to make it better!
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MOM
Maybe you should listen to Mr. Ilyasova. What he says is very cool, you just have to show up with a good attitude!
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SAM
I can't believe it that's so interesting!
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MOM
The stars are just like the sun, except for they're really far away!
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SAM
That's so cool! What about the stars?
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MOM
The sun's light reflects off of the moon and makes it bright and clear for us to see!
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SAM
Then how can we see them so clearly?
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MOM
Why, that's in outer space also.
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SAM
Mom, where is the moon?
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Mom
Why, they're in outer space.
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SAM
Mom?
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Sam gets out of bed and walks to the window.
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MOM
Sam! The moon and stars are beautiful and you have to realize their importance and beauty! Showing up late to class isn't going to help you.
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SAM
Yes mom, but Mr. Ilyasova has been singling me out in class. I don't care about the moon and the stars! I wanna learn about baseball and race cars!
MaxK edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
MOM is rocking back and forth in her chair while knitting. Meanwhile, the clock moves from 7 to 8:10.
MaxK added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
SAM
Yes mom, but Mr. Ilyasova has been singling me out in class. I don't care about the moon and the stars
MaxK added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
MOM is rocking back and forth in her chair while knitting.
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