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END OF EPISODE 1
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Greg
Mission failed....return to base...
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POV of GREG as he walks up to last fiend, withdrawals pistol, places it to the back of fiends head....camera pans, circles, finally GREG pulls the trigger. and then again and again and again....
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Duck
(gleeful, excitedly)
Yes, sir....
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GREG
DUCK!
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ILLANA executes fiend
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ILLANA
(resisiting the urge to shoot GREG EAGLES in the dick and leave him for dead)
(Disrespectfully)
Yes. Sir.
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GREG
We're not soldiers, ILLANA. In case you've forgotten. YOUR not a soldier...We're mercenaries...mercenaries only live by two rules: Mercenaries don't take prisoners, and Mercenaries get paid. I need him dead, NOW....NOW!
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Illana
Under the laws of war, it is especially forbidden....to declare that no quarter will be given...It's a War Crime! We can't!
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Illana
Sir, we cant!
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GREG
Take. Him. Out.
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ILLANA
Sir, they are prisoners! Scum yes, but we don't just go around executing prisoners!
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GrEG
No....Take him out.
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ILLANA
SIR! I said we have three of them! They were surrendered during the fight. Take them in for questioning?
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After ambush Camera pans on Carnage. NORA, TRENTON, NICOLAS, GAGE, and SPENCER are all dead. Shell shock noises are ringing in the POV view of GREG EAGLES ears. ILLANNA is Saying something but its inaudible. Finally GREG snaps out of it and hears what ILLANA is saying
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After ambush Camera pans on Carnage. NORA, TRENTON, NICOLAS,
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Duck
Finish Him! He's weak!
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Illana
Firewall! On My three! Duck! Now!
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Greg
Contact! Front!
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Greg
Nora! Trenton! *Boom*
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Spencer
My scanners are picking something up
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Greg Eagles
This is our asset. A Mr. Easy, I don't know who he is or what his deal is. All I know is were paid. Get him to our contact in Goodsprings. Air travel is not...
(sees duck malfunctioning)
...air travel is not possible. This is a low key mission and we don't need NCR crawling up our ass when they see vertibirds. Trenton, You mapped out the route so its your show. Nicolas, fix Ducks god damn suit if you would? Everyone else stay deadly. Let's move.
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DUCK
MY Suit! Somethings wrong with my suit! Gah!
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Greg Eagles
Trenton, Nora, I want you two hugging the asset.
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Greg addresses sickle cell mercenaries
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INT. ext. Nevada Desert-afternoon
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arrival at operation zone.
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Greg
*sigh*....Every time, Duck...Every single freaking time...You ask that same question every time I say PMC....It's Private Military Company!!! Write it down on your goddamn helmet if you cant remember...Your just lucky your so god damn good at this....Check equipment, We embark in an hour
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Duck
What's a "PMC"?
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GREG
This is for all you newbies. Welcome to the Sickle Cell, The premiere PMC specializing in Security management, and full-service risk management consulting. All of you are expected to do your duties. You do your duties you get paid. Any questions?
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GREG
This is for all you newbies. Welcome to the Sickle Cell, The premiere PMC specializing in Security management, and full-service risk management consulting.
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Camera pans to all troops.
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Greg
Our next objective is your standard security protection detail....Protect asset,
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Greg
This upcoming mission is your standard security management contract...Protect the asset, keep the horizon clear, blah blah blah...additional details upon arrival to operation zone. This is for those of you that
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This is for those of you that are new...
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Camera Pans to group of mercenaries in room. ILLANA and DUCK are visible.
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Eagles
Shut the fuck up everyone, please. Please...everyone....shut the fuck up...
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GREg eagles slides into room
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Duck
(Not believing her)
Why? Cuz of what he is? He some sorta badass? We got a... a Van- Diesel over here?
(voice actor HAS to mispronounce vin diesel as VAN diesel
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ILLana
Because of what he knows...I didn't hear much from my buddy in administration but I DO know he knows something...Whatever it is, it's worth alot.
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Duck
(Not believing her)
Why? Cuz of what he is? He some sorta badass? We got a Van- Diesel over here?
(voice actor HAS to mispronounce vin diesel as VAN diesel)
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Illana
No no, not some casino junkie...I'm saying a high, HIGH roller...
(Voice lowers)
Word is he is wanted by both the NCR and Caesars Legion...
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Duck
A High roller? Maaaaan I'm getting sick of these New Vegas chumps prancing around all rich...
(Angry for no reason)
They sit their in their FUCKING towers, JUDGING us...
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Illana
No no, not some casino junkie...I'm saying a high, HIGH roller...
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Duck
A High roller? Maaaaan I'm getting sick of these New Vegas chumps prancing around...They sit their in their fucking tower
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Illana
I heard rumors down the pipeline that our next protection detail is a VIP...a high roller...
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We are introduced to ILLANA KUTSKOVA, the strong, independent mercenary who can take care of herself and DUCK FUMBLECORN0- The Idiot Savant of Warfare.
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We are introduced to ILLANA KUTSKOVA and DUCK FUMBLECORN
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INT. Exterior-Nevada Mercenary HQ
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