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This is your first scene. Last edited by johannadavinson, on 12/07/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

jane's house - evening

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Jane is writing on her diary. The bell rings. Jane closes the book and brings it out. At the living room Jane just realized that she brought the diary.

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jane

(disappointed smile) Hi!

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bobby

(wearing hoodie, hands on pocket, smiles back) Ready?

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jane

Just.. hold on a minute.. Come inside!

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bobby

Okay.

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Jane stops for a moment and stares at her diary, then puts it on the coffee table.

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Jane walks to the front door and opens the door.

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Bobby comes inside the house and sits on the couch. He grabs a newspaper beside him and gets bored in no time. Then he frowns while staring at a book which is Jane's diary. Then he grabs it, then starts to read. He reads at the last post.

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Camera faces the diary.

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jane (v.o)

December 20 2011. Dear diary. Today is the first day of holiday. Sharon, Maria, Katy, and I went hang out, catching some films, we ate a lot and took a lot of pictures. It was tiring but pretty fun though. Bobby will pick me up tonight. I hope he will wear something nice, not a crazy hoodie as the one he wore the previous time. It was totally enough to make me fed up. Hope he wont disappoint me this evening.

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Bobby looks down at what he wears. Then looks up (panicked)

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bobby

Baby!!!

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jane (v.o)

Yea??

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bobby

May I use the bathroom?

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jane (v.o)

Okay

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Bobby silently walks to Jane's brother's room. He opens the door.

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TIM

(frowns) Who are you? What the heck are you doing here?

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bobby

Hi! I'm Bobby, your sister's boyfriend. Listen. You have to help me.

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TIM

Whoa! My sister is finally having a boyfriend and his name is boobie.

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bobby

Ah!! We can talk later. Now I need your help.

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TIM

I'm not sure I can help you with your hoodie.

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Bobby walks to the cupboard and opens it. All are hoodies. His hand searches if there is any non-hoodie in there.

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bobby

Shit. You crazy?

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Tim shrugs.

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bobby (Cont'D)

(Keeps searching) Guess your sister never go anywhere with you.

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TIM

Nice guessing. She always dumps the guys who wear hoodie for dating her. You're lucky one.

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Bobby finally finds a shirt with coat. He takes it out.

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Camera pans Bobby's body down to up. Converse, jeans, too-small-shirt and coat.

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TIM

Good! This will work.

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bobby

Sure?

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Tim nods 3 times.

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jane

Hi! You ready?

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bobby

Uh. Yea!

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jane

(Smiling awkwardly) Let's go!

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romantic outdoor restaurant . evening

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Bobby and Jane are reading the menu.

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jane

One beef tenderloin please.

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waiter

(writing down) One beef tenderloin. Anything else?

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bobby

Make it two. And 2 red wine please

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waiter

Okay.

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Bobby and Jane are looking at people dancing with the romantic music.

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bobby

Do you wanna dance with me?

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jane

Ahaha. I can't

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bobby

Of course you can.

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Bobby offers his hand. Jane accepts the offer to dance.

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Camera zooms out, showing everybody is looking at the too-small-shirt Bobby wears.

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jane

(smiles to Bobby) Don't worry about them.

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bobby

I don't.

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Bobby and Jane dance together. When Bobby lifts his hand, he rips the sleeve.

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Everybody looks and laughs at him.

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Jane busts to laughter.

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street . evening

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Bobby and Jane are walking on the curb. They are laughing together.

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jane

(giggles) You look good in that anyway.

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bobby

Hahaha. I know what it means.

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Jane chuckles.

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bobby (Cont'D)

Ah. I'm doing it for you!

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jane

How do you know I don't like you wearing hoodie?

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bobby

I'm your boyfriend.

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jane

Ahahah. Next time, I wont let you read my diary.

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bobby

Does it mean I have to follow my intuition for what to do and what are forbidden to do for our date? Huh?

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jane

Sort of. Hahaha.

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Bobby chuckles and embraces Jane.

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jane's house . evening

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Jane opens her bedroom door. She exhales and hangs her handbag. Then freezes for a moment. She opens the door again to go out, then comes back with the diary.

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Jane starts writing again. (Camera faces the writings)

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jane (V.O)

I had a wonderful date with Bobby tonight. He borrowed Timmy's shirt just for me, even it was embarrassing for him.

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Jane closes the diary, puts inside the drawer, then prays for a while before going to bed.

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jane's house . morning

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Jane is still sleeping when the phone beeps. She looks for her phone with her eyes closed and she finds it.

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Camera to the phone. Text:

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bobby

I miss you already. I'll pick you up on 7 PM tonight. I wont wear hoodie, so be cute! Love ya.

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jane's house . evening

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Jane prepares for the date. She tries different dresses, wears makeup, perfume, and so on but not finished yet.

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Jane writes something on her diary

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Bell rings

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Jane closes the diary and brings it outside to put it on the coffee table.

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Bobby comes into the house and sits on the couch. Jane leaves to her room and he reads the diary for a moment.

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bobby

Flowers? (tic toc tic toc)

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Camera to front door. Timmy and his girlfriend comes into the house with flowers on the girl's grasp.

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Bobby takes the flowers from the girl's hand while bringing out his palm to show he actually says sorry.

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Door opens and Jane is surprised. She accepts the flowers and looks at it. Then she gives it back to Bobby and shakes her head.

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Camera to flower. There is a text "For My Love, Ellie"

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Jane pulls Bobby's hand to show that she wants to go now. Bobby puts the flower on the coffee table.

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Jane opens the door, they go out, then she closes the door.

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jane's house . evening

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(Fast motion) Jane gets into the house, opens bedroom door, comes inside the bedroom, closes the door, writes on her diary, prays, turns off the light, sleeps.

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jane's house . morning

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(Fast motion) Bell rings, Jane comes out, puts the diary on coffee table, opens the front door, seeing Bobby with flowers.

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(Normal motion)

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bobby

Hi!

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Bobby comes inside, sits on the couch, reads the diary.

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(Diary on screen, very slight opacity) Door opens, Bobby there with flowers, showing his car.

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bobby (CONT'D)

Hi!

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(Diary on screen, very slight opacity) Door opens, Bobby there with flowers, his car on the background, bringing guitar, comes inside and plays the guitar.

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Bobby is sitting on the couch, reading the diary.

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jane (v.o)

Dear Diary. I love how Bobby plays guitar for me. Tomorrow is Christmas and I wish he would play a song while singing for me about himself and what he feels upon me.

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jane's house . envening

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Door bell rings. Jane rushes to the front door. She opens the door and Bobby is there. Wearing hoodie, no car, no flower, he brings guitar.

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jane

Hi!

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Bobby does not respond, he gets into the house and sits on the couch, preparing to play the guitar.

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Bobby sings while playing guitar.

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bobby

I'm tired of being what you want me to be. Feeling so faithless, lost under the surface. Don't know what you're expecting of me. Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes .....

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CREDITS.

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