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johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011. johannadavinson made 23 other changes.
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
CREDITS.
johannadavinson added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
bobby
I'm tired of being what you want me to be. Feeling so faithless, lost under the surface. Don't know what you're expecting of me. Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes .....
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
Bobby sings while playing guitar.
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
Bobby does not respond, he gets into the house and sits on the couch, preparing to play the guitar.
johannadavinson added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
jane
Hi!
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
Door bell rings. Jane rushes to the front door. She opens the door and Bobby is there. Wearing hoodie, no car, no flower, he brings guitar.
johannadavinson added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
INT. jane's house . envening
johannadavinson added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
jane (v.o)
Dear Diary. I love how Bobby plays guitar for me. Tomorrow is Christmas and I wish he would play a song while singing for me about himself and what he feels upon me.
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
Bobby is sitting on the couch, reading the diary.
johannadavinson edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Diary on screen, very slight opacity) Door opens, Bobby there with flowers, his car on the background, bringing guitar, comes inside and plays the guitar.
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Diary on screen, very slight opacity) Door opens, Bobby there with flowers, his car on the background, bringing guitar, comes inside and plays the guitar
johannadavinson added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
bobby
Hi!
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Diary on screen, very slight opacity) Door opens, Bobby there with flowers, showing his car.
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
Bobby comes inside, sits on the couch, reads the diary.
johannadavinson edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Fast motion) Bell rings, Jane comes out, puts the diary on coffee table, opens the front door, seeing Bobby with flowers.
johannadavinson added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
bobby
Hi!
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Normal motion)
johannadavinson edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Fast motion) Bell rings, Jane comes out, opens the front door, seeing Bobby with flowers.
johannadavinson inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
INT. jane's house . morning
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Fast motion) Bell rings,
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
(Fast motion) Jane gets into the house, opens bedroom door, comes inside the bedroom, closes the door, writes on her diary, prays, turns off the light, sleeps.
johannadavinson added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
INT. jane's house . evening
johannadavinson added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/18/2011 [view]
Jane opens the door, they go out, then she closes the door.
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