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The two hitchhikers look at each other and give an evil smile. The male hitchhiker grabs Adams's body and jumps inhumanly high and out of sight with it. The female hitchhiker slowly walks back up to the road, and sticks out her thumb, just as the headlights draw near.
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INT. Joey Marlowe
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INT. INT. Car - night
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In the distance, another pair of headlights shows up, heading their direction.
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Adams dies on impact, but the female hitchhiker gets out of the car completely unharmed. The male hitchhiker walks up to the scene smiling.
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The female hitchhiker flashes her knife and stabs Adams in the gut. He swerves violently and hits a tree just off the side of the road.
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Adams looks at the male hitchhiker, then looks forward.
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Female hitchHiker
Get out of the car.
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Adams hears a knock on his window. He turns his head to see the hitchhiker standing right next to his car, holding a knife. He jumps in his seat and quickly turns his head to the female hitchhiker, who is now holding a knife as well. She slowly presses it up to his neck.
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Female hitchHiker
I think I have an idea.
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Adams
If you want to go, then go. There's no way you're going to find out what happened back there.
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Adams brings the car to a screeching halt. With both hands still on the wheel, he relaxes and lets out a sigh.
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Female hitchHiker
Stop the god damn car!
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The female hitchhiker interrupts him.
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Adams
Oh come on, don't be ridicul-
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Female hitchHiker
Stop the car.
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The female hitchhiker becomes angry with Adams and changes her tone.
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Adams
But I'm not going to! Accept that!
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Female hitchHiker
Well if you told me-
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Adams
Listen. Shut up, and just sit there like a normal hitchhiker.
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Adams is losing focus on his mirrors as he is becoming more frustrated with the female hitchhiker.
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Adams
Listen. Shut up, and sit there awkwardly like a normal hitchhiker.
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Female hitchHiker
Just tell me!
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Adams keeps nervously checking his mirrors, as if expecting to see the hitchhiker in the distance.
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adams
I'd rather not. It's just something... something that spooked me, that's all.
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Female hitchHiker
Look we're going to be on a long car ride together, you might as well tell me.
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adams
Uhh... nothing. It was nothing.
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Female hitchHiker
What happened back there?
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Adams and the female hitchhiker are driving in complete silence. Adams keeps checking his rear view mirror every couple of seconds to make sure the hitchhiker isn't there.
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INT. int. car - night
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Adams
Thanks.
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The female hitchhiker gets up from the table and begins walking with
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Adams
We'll get another one down the road, let's go!
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Female hitchHiker
But I haven't finished my-
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adams
Come on, we're leaving.
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Adams walks rapidly through the diner, He doesn't stop moving and calls out to the female hitchhiker.
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INT. int. diner - night
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Adams is washing his hands when a man walks in to the bathroom. He turns and looks quickly then does a double take. Adams looks forward in to the mirror to see the male hitchhiker walking in to a stall. His eyes widen and he hurries out of the bathroom.
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Female hitchHiker
These really are great burgers.
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Female hitchHiker
Oh, yes.
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Female hitchHiker
What kind of plans?
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Adams is washing his hands when a man walks in to the bathroom. He turns and looks quickly then does a double take. Adams looks forward in to the mirror to see the
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INT. INT. diner bathroom - night
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Adams is washing his hands when a man walks in to the bathroom
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INT. INT. bathroom - night
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Adams gets up and walks through the diner. The Female Hitchhiker then looks at the door and gives a smirk to the person who walks in, whom is unrevealed.
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