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This is your first scene. Last edited by Jasmi, a year ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

ext. abandoned carnival - night

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

JEFFERY is making his way to a large tent in the middle of the carnival, dragging a large black bag with a terrible stench leaking red liquid. A sign hanging from the entrance read "Fun Time Square." He hears leaves rustling behind him, he turns his head. His pale face reflected the moonlight and his lips are sewn shut with a painted smile stained by dry blood. Soft voices are heard in the distance. He turns back and enters fun time square.

Jasmi - a year ago 7 versions.

(V.O) Victoria

Why did we have to come here? Who takes their girlfriend to a creepy carnival as a date? Seriously Danny?

Jasmi - a year ago

(V.O) Danny

Come on. This could be awesome. Plus can you say you really know the history of this place?

Jasmi - a year ago 2 versions.

Victoria sighs and rolls her eyes.

Jasmi - a year ago

(v.O) Victoria

God Danny. You couldn't use your brain and think of a better place to take me. You're literally the worst ever.

(V.O) DanNY

i just wanted to be alone with you.

atellez10 - a year ago 2 versions.

(V.O) Victoria (moves)

Let´s (sighs) Sit down

Victoria and Danny move towards the tent and sit down.

danny

Victoria, I have something really important to tell you.

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

(V.O) Victoria

What is it? (shivering) It's cold

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

DANNY wraps his arms around Victoria to keep her warm. VICTORIA submits.

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

danny

Victoria (pauses) I love you

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

Victoria

Danny... listen. I-

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

They hear a loud bang come from inside fun time square.

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

Victoria (CONT'D)

Oh my God, what was that?

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

danny

I don't know

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

DANNY stands up from the bench and starts towards the tent. He peeks inside.It's dark, and the only illumination is a few blinking stage lights over the top of the arena.

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

Danny (CONT'D)

Wanna check it out?

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

Victoria

Danny! No! I'm not going in there! It's dark! What if we trip or something? Or worse, what if someone's in there?!

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

Danny

Oh come on Victoria, have some fun with me! Come on!

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

They hear muffled thud and suddenly the carnival comes to life. The carousel's lights come on and eerie children's music start to play loudly.

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria

Danny? What's going on? This isn't funny aymore.

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny

I didn't plan this but let's get out of here before the cops show up

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny and Victoria start to make their way through the carnival to leave when they hear a high pitch, child's laughter in the distance.

atellez10 - a year ago 5 versions.

Victoria

Was that a kid?

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny

No, it was probably the machines.

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria

I'm pretty sure that was a kid, Danny!

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny

Well if it was, we should probably get home so we can call the cops

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria

We have to go find out, what if it's in danger?

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny

Then that means we are too. Which means that we should get home soon.

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria

You can leave then, I wouldn't be able to sleep at night, knowing there was someone who needed help

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria begins to move away from Danny and further into the carnival. Danny runs to her in an effort to catch up.

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny

I'm coming with you, I can't just leave you.

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria grabs his hand and squeezes it.

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria

Thank you, I'm scared.

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny

It's all part of the fun

atellez10 - a year ago

Letting go hands, they make their way into a big, gold and red tent.

atellez10 - a year ago

INT. BIG RED tent- midnight

atellez10 - a year ago

Victoria

This must be where they had the shows.

atellez10 - a year ago

Danny

This is-

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

Danny is cut off by yet another shrill laugh coming from behind the large red curtains.

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago

Victoria

You can't say that you didn't hear that! Let's go!

time_in_a_bottle - a year ago
 
 
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