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bonniehoots added dialogue in "Scene 2" on 04/19/2011. bonniehoots made 59 other changes.
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Bella
You've been holding out on me!
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Edward chuckles, keeping his arm around Bella's waist.
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EMMETT clears his throat.
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Jacob grabs her face between his hands. He kisses her softly then harder.
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Bella
I love you.
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Bella smiles up at him.
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Edward strokes Bella's cheeks.
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Edward
Don't panic love. You're a bit stronger than I am for the moment.
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Bella
Opps, sorry Edward.
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Edward grabs Bella's hand tightly. He shows paralyzing fear, because Bella isn't responding.
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Edward is shaking with fear.
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CARLISLE grabs Edward's hand.
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Edward meekly smiles.
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Edward puts his head down on the desk.
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Edward walks out with Carlisle.
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Edward strokes Bella's cheeks
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Edward
Ow Bella!
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EDWARD arrives in the room where Bella is. He smiles and helps her up.
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Edward
(whispers)
Bella, I love you. Bella, I'm sorry.
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Edward
But she's so still. I MUST have done something wrong.
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Edward
And her-her spine?
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Edward (CONT'D)
Maybe...Carlisle, maybe I was too late.
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Edward
Bella? Bella, love? Can you open your eyes? Can you squeeze my hand?
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Bella
Opps, sorry
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jacob
Ow Bella!
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Jacob shits his weight uncomfortably, leaning away.
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Bella presses her face into his smooth chest.
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Jacob strokes Bella's cheeks
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jacob
Um...carefully, Bella.
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JACOB arrives in the room
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BELLA opens and rubs her eyes.
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INT. Int. - Edward cullen's house- midnight
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bella
My throat is on fire. I don't feel right. My heart...burns.
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Jacob walks out with Carlisle.
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Suddenly, her body shakes rapidly like a seizure.
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BELLA slowly opens her eyes in bed.
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Bella lays still on her bed.
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bella
My throat is on fire
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BELLA slowly opens her eyes.
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jacob
(whispers)
Bella, I love you. Bella, I'm sorry.
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Jacob puts his head down on the desk.
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Carlisle
Or something right, Edward. Son, you did everything you could or even more. I'm not sure I would have had the persistence, the faith it took to save her. Stop berating yourself. Bella is going to be fine.
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Jacob
But she's so still. I MUST have done something wrong.
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Carlisle
Her injuries weren't so much worse than Esme's. The venom will hear her as it did Esme.
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jacob
And her-her spine?
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Jacob meekly smiles.
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Carlisle
Listen to her heart, Edward. It's stronger than even Emmett's was. I've never heard anything so vital. She'll be perfect.
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