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EXT. front of school — day

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Four students arrive at school. The first two being JIM and STEVE who walk through the front gate before VANESSA arrives and gets out of the car and looks up at the school.She walks up to the two boys who are looking at the school.

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Vanessa

Hey Jim! Hey..err

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She looks at Steve with a disgusted look. These two do not get along.

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Jim

Hey Vanessa!

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Steve

Errr...

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Jim

Do you two have to start this everytime?

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They bioth just look away from each other. At this moment a car pulls up and an attractive female steps put of the car.

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Steve

Shit man its Lindsey!

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Vanessa

Oh god!

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She doesn't like her either.

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Lindsey strolls up to the other three walking as if she is a model.

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lindsey

Ok. Whats going on?

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Jim

Schools closed. I think? Why haven't we been told it is though?

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Steve

Well we better go and have a look then. Haha!

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Steve runs up to the school and opens the door. Jim runs after him to catch up.

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Jim

Steve wait! Hold on! Shouldn't we wait?

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The two girls follow them into the school. But the camera holds back to watch the four students walk into the school.

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INT. School Corridor — day

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Steve

F**k me! Ive never new the school could be so quiet.

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Jim

I dont think that we're meant to be here.

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Lindsey

If we get caught will we get into trouble and i cnt get put into detention again.

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Steve

Oh stop crying. We're nt gonna get caught in this school. Its massive!

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Jim

But if we do Steve you'll get excluded again.

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Steve

Stop whinging! we're not gonna get caught!

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They walk slowly down the corridor near the sixth form common room. Suddenly they hear a door SLAM and run into the common room and Steve burts out into laughter.

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INT. Sixth Form Common Room — day

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Vanessa

Its not funny Steve! someone could be here and we could get into really big trouble!

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Steve

What? No cars in the car park, No bikes and can you see any people.....NO so i dont think theres anyone here apart from us.

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Steve slaps Lindsey's bottom and winks as she turns around. She gives him a little sarcastic smile and slaps him around the face.

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Jim

Maybe we should go out to see if anyone else is here

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Vanessa

Yeah good idea!

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Shes smiles at Jim then frowns at Steve. Steve sticks his middle finger up at her behind her back.

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INT. School Corridor — day

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As they walk slowly down the corridor they start hearing creaking and squeaking of doors.

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Vanessa

There is someone here. Oh god we're gonna get into trouble then il be grounded because my mum and dad will go mental.

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Steve

Oh shut up! theres no one here. Its your mind playing tricks on you.

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They hear more creaking noices around the school.

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Vanessa

See! There is someone here! Oh god!

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Lindsey

Great! Another detention.

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Jim

Not definately. As long as we stay awy from who ever is here we will be ok.

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Jim stops and as the others come around the corner they do not undertand what he has seen.

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Vanessa

Jim what is it?

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Then the other three see the black figure standing at the other end of the corridor. Without a thought Jim looks to his left where the staircase is.

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Jim

RUN!!!

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They make a dash for the stairs and try to run as fast as they can up the staircase. The camera looks down from the top of the stairs to see how fast they are running. Then the camera follows them up the stairs as if it is the black figure chasing them.

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The vilain catches up with lindsey who trips on one of the steps. as the camera closes in on her face she screams and it fades to the other three.

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INT. Top of the stairs — day

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Jim Steve and Vanessa make it to the top of the stairs and look down but there is no one to be seen.

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Steve

What the f**k was that?!?!

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Jim

Wheres Lindsey?

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Steve

LINDSEY! LINDSEY!

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Theres no answer.

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Steve (CONT'D)

I think shes gone. for good

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The atmosphere in the group drops after losing Lindsey and the three of them go sad.

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They wait a moment after running up the stairs so fast. They are out of breath. Steve is leaning up against the banister and Jim and Vanessa are leaning against the wall.

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Steve (CONT'D)

Shit! get the door open!

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Jim struggles with the door.

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Steve (CONT'D)

Get the door open Jim!!! Come On!!!!!

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Jim

It wont! we'l have to go another way.

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They run down the stairs and try to get out the front door of the school.

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Jim (CONT'D)

Its locked.

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Steve

Shit!

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Steve bangs on the door in anger

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Steve (CONT'D)

AHHHHH!!!

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Jim

Steve Shut up.

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INT. School Hall — day

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They run into the school hall. The doors are not locked to this room.

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Steve

What the f**k are we going to do?

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Jim sits and just stares at the ground, drained off all hope.

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Vanessa

So we're just going to sit here and wait.

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Jim still sits staring at the ground.

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The three of them sit there in silence drained of energy and hope. Then suddenly Jim stands up.

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Jim (CONT'D)

We cant just sit here. We've gotta get out otherwise wha ever happened to Lindsey will happen to us.

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Vanessa

Yeah your right we need to find a way out.

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Steve

Yeah i think i know a way.

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The camera follows them running through the gym to get to where the store the sports equipment. Steve knows this way well as he is the captain of the schools football team.

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INT. School Gym — day

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Steve

Haha i told you so!

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Just at that moment the door to the gym SLAMS and the black figure stands opposite them across the other side of the gym.

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Steve (CONT'D)

Who are you!

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The figure stays standing completely still, just staring at them.

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Jim

Vanessa go through the door now.

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Vanessa

What? no! im not stayin in here on my own.

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Jim

You wont be. Steve's going with you.

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Steve

What? Mate come on. You dont have to do this. We can all get in here and wait till its gone.

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Jim

No. I wont be happy until its got one of us.

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Steve

But it already took Lindsey.

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Jim

We dont know that for sure Steve. Wait in there for a few hours and it should all be over.

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Vanessa

Are you sure Jim?

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Jim

Its what has to be done.

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She gives him a kiss on the cheek and Steve gives him a big hug. They both go into the store room. They watch on as Jim shuts the door and locks it. The camera closes in on Jims face as a tear runs down his face. The screen goes black.

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EXT. School Yard — Day

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Fades in with 20 years later at the bottom of the screen. A front page of a newspaper is blown across the empty yard and gets stuck on to the wall. The headline reads'SCHOOL TRAGEDY' and underneath reads '20 YEAR ANNIVERSARY'

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