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Ian wins a free day spa day for two and takes Oliver along, only to find out Steven has a sad secret.

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Steveindeed333 joined the project! 6 months ago. more
mickverberg edited dialogue in "At the Spa" 7 months ago. mickverberg made 2 other changes. more
steven
Have you forgotten he is my son? He is a peanut. He has an unquenchable thirst for jelly. The giant slices of bread he sleeps in cost enough... But that sweet, sweet boy jelly. There are street drugs less expensive. He can't stop and refuses to. That's all he does, day and night.
(imitating his son)
"OOOH DADDY GIMME THAT JELLY!"
(back in a normal voice)
So I started working more jobs.
mickverberg edited dialogue in "Ian Calls the Radio Station" 8 months ago. mickverberg made 3 other changes. more
radio dj
(in a smooth, deep, soulful, black sounding voice)
And that was "Apples are for Lonely Boys [Please Send This Check to My Grandmother]" by one of my personal favorites: Tugboat Princess. The song came off of their new album: Enrique's Got a Bad Case of the Jeepers. This commercial break gonna be real short for ya, but before it begins, time for our weekly giveaway contest. We got some hot, fresh free spa days for ya on a couple pieces of
(makes loud sniffing noise)
Ooh, Vellum Bristol paper. Mmmm. You know what you gotta do. Be the 12th to call your Uncle J at 555-JAZZ and these puppies are yours for the taking. Ready?
(waits a couple seconds)
Call now. This is Uncle J with WJAZ, bringing you smooth jazz all day long, baby.
mickverberg edited dialogue in "Intervention Meeting at Work" 8 months ago. mickverberg made 5 other changes. more
kid 2
(astonished)
That was a bowling ball...
mickverberg edited dialogue in "At the Spa" 10 months ago. mickverberg made 10 other changes. more
ian
(sniffing and wiping a tear)
Working two jobs and caring for your son must be pretty tough, man.
 

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