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Chet confronts Steven about his disregard towards the company dress code. Steven begins to mess with Chet's head.

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mickverberg edited dialogue in "Int. lol-Mart Loss Prevention Office - Mid-Evening" 4 weeks ago. mickverberg made 2 other changes. more
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That's too bad, cause I was this close to the sweet release of death right there. I just need to catch an employee violating the dress code.
mickverberg edited an action in "Int. lol-Mart Loss Prevention Office - Mid-Evening" 6 months ago. mickverberg made 2 other changes. more
He holds completely still and the vest just appears on his body. There is no sound or effect to indicate that it happened. He smiles mischievously.
Steveindeed333 edited an action in "Int. Chet's House - Night" 6 months ago. Steveindeed333 made 3 other changes. more
Chet bursts through his bathroom door, crying, and sheds off his clothes. The camera only films from the stomach up at this point. He opens the shower curtain and climbs in. He turns on the faucet, and sits down on the floor of the shower in the fetal position to continue crying. The camera zooms on his face, and the water suddenly stops. He looks up at the SHOWER HEAD. There are a few seconds of stark silence before a suctioning noise is heard and Steven materializes out of the showerhead wearing his vest. Chet falls to his side crying and screaming more.
mickverberg edited an action in "Int. lol-Mart Loss Prevention Office - Mid-Evening" 6 months ago. mickverberg made 24 other changes. more
Chet enters the office. It is dark and kind of creepy. He takes careful steps as he goes down the dark hallway. He reaches light, which is emanating from several different security monitors, showing all kinds of areas of the store (NEED HELP COMING UP WITH FUNNY THINGS IN THE BACKGROUND). Chet notices a baby bottle on the desk. He lifts it up to his nose and sniffs.
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