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my edit of amey/tom's script that i hope I dont fuck up

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angelneri inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago. angelneri made 6 other changes. more
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angelneri added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. angelneri made 54 other changes. more
The whole thing with EMILY happens. nothing I'd change there. all good. also the whole thing with ADAM. that's good. maybe just don't say 'creepo'. maybe just leave it at 'creep' or something along those lines. Other than that that's about it. I re-wrote the bits that I thought would be overly cheesy, and took out the bit about ZACK's girlfriend bc it felt a bit out of nowhere. maybe add the playful mean things among friends in other ways(?). Otherwise, like I said earlier, good story and script. well done guys. u guys r cool im excited to see it actually come to life. feel free to tell me to fuck off and stop messing with ur script.
 

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