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This is your first scene. Last edited by matthewligon, a year ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

THE CAMERA SHOWS A MAN ASLEEP IN HIS BED AND ALL OF THE SUDDEN THE SCREEN SHOWS PICTURES OF WAR. THEN, THE MAN WAKES UP SWEATING WITH THE ALARM CLOCK BUZZING IN HIS EAR. HE STEPPED OUT OF BED AND PULLED ON A T-SHIRT THAT SAID "ARMY". HE WAS TWENTY YEARS OLD AND HIS NAME WAS TIM NELSON.

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He walked out of the room.

man 1

"What's wrong?"

tim nelson

"I couldn't sleep."

Another man walks into the room with a m4

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man 2

"The Captain told us that were moving out at 1,300.

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The camera goes outside, it shows men with gear on, and in camo, loading onto a helicopter. Then Tim and Man 1 come out and get on the helicopter.

Tim Nelson walks into his room and gets ready.

scene ends

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helicopter rid Last edited by matthewligon, a year ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

The scene opens with man 1, man 2, and tim nelson loading onto the helicopter

pilot

hold on.

30 minutes later they were at the triangle of death

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pilot (CONT'D)

were going to land out side of the city so we wont git shit from the iraqens.

CAPTAN

THAT'S OK

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THE HELLICOPTER lands

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captin

go go go go

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that second a storm of bullets wizzed past you see private thamise johnson fall as a bullet hits his head he was killed instently his body gets draged off by a man

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CAPTAN

get cover.

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then the man that was running falls.

man 1

"Medic medic."

the medic runs and grabs his collar and drags him to safety

the medic was working on his stumic with twesers blood is squerting every were

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man 2

"Where is the cars that they sent for us damnit."

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MAN 3

"Here they come."

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The men run to the cars and get in.

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driver

"Where are they shooting at us from"

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Suddenly the car in front of them explodes. Their car swerves and flips onto it's side.

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driver

My leg, its stuck!

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the drivers leg was crushed by the door

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They look to see a man pointing at the car with an RPG. He is about 40 yards away.

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tim nelson

My god!

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driver

Hurry! Get me out!

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tim know it was to late but he still hanked the driver ws now screaming

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The man fires the RPG.

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TIM dives out the windshield and jumps to the side behind the other destroyed car.

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driver (CONT'D)

No! Get me the hel-

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Just then the car explodes

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TIM pulls a pistol from a holster and loads it with a mag.

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He looks and sees the man with the RPG now holding two m1911 pistols, and two other men holding AK-47s

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