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INT. The scene opens with man 1, man 2, and tim nelson loading onto the helicopter —
matthewligon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Tim Nelson walks into his room and gets ready.
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man 1
"In an hour."
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tim nelson (CONT'D)
"When are we leaving?"
matthewligon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
The camera goes outside, it shows men with gear on, and in camo, loading onto a helicopter. Then Tim and Man 1 come out and get on the helicopter.
matthewligon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
man 2
"The Captain told us to help Platoon 7 in Iraq."
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Another man walks into the room with a machine gun.
matthewligon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
tim nelson
"I couldn't sleep."
matthewligon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
man 1
"What's wrong?"
matthewligon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
He walked out of the room.
matthewligon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
the camera goes outside it shows men with gear on and in camo, loading onto a helicopter. Then tim and man 1 come out and get on the helicopter
matthewligon added an action in "helicopter rid" a year ago [view]
then the man that was running falls crap.
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CAPTAN
get cover.
matthewligon edited an action in "helicopter rid" a year ago [view]
that second a storm of shots the pilot get's out just in time as the hellicopter blows up.