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mwolpoff added an action in "Opening Scene" on 01/13/2010. mwolpoff made 33 other changes.
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The pair once more sit around a fire, this time they both hold cigarettes in their mouths from the start of the scene.
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INT. ext. desert - night
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They walk together throughout the day. At one point, the younger man pokes the older one and gestures for a drink. The older man nods, removes the canteen from his supplies, and hands it to the younger man, who drinks. After he is finished, the older man gestures for him to return the canteen to the older man's possession. The younger man is reluctant, and the older man stops moving. He holds out his hand, waiting for the canteen. The younger man eventually concedes.
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They sit together, in silence, for a few more moments.
mwolpoff added an action in "Opening Scene" on 01/13/2010 [view]
They walk together throughout the day. At one point, the younger man pokes the older one and gestures for a drink. The older man nods, removes the canteen from his supplies, and hands it to the younger man, who drinks. After he is finished, the older man gestures for him to return the canteen to the older man's possession. The younger man is reluctant, and the older man stops moving. He holds out his hand, waiting for the canteen. The younger man eventually concedes.
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The older man stands, picks up his pack, and begins walking, confidently, away from the sun. The younger man has no supplies, and hence simply stands and follows.
mwolpoff added an action in "Opening Scene" on 01/13/2010 [view]
The older man stands, picks up his pack, and begins walking, confidently, away from the sun. The younger man has no supplies, and hence simply stands and follows. They walk together through out the day,
mwolpoff edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2010 [view]
The younger man hesitates for a moment, most likely in a disoriented state, but soon nods. The older man hands him a canteen, of which he quickly drinks. The older man extends his hand to help the younger up, and he accepts.
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Older Man
Time to go.
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The younger man awakens to the sun. The older man is fully awake and alert, he has been up for some time. He is sitting comfortably, smoking, and staring off into the sunrise.
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INT. ext. desert - Morning
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The younger man awakens to the sun. The older man is fully awake and alert, he has been up for some time. He is sitting comfortably
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They sit together, in silence, for a few more moments. The scene ends.
mwolpoff added an action in "Opening Scene" on 01/13/2010 [view]
The younger man awakens to the sun. The older man is fully awake and alert, he has been up for some time.
mwolpoff added a slugline in "Opening Scene" on 01/13/2010 [view]
INT. ext. desert - day
mwolpoff added an action in "Opening Scene" on 01/13/2010 [view]
They sit together, in silence, for a few more moments. Then the scene ends.
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older man
Except me.
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Younger man
Except you?
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Older Man
I know. 'ts why I stopped. Nobody makes it out here long.
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Younger man
I wouldn't have made it much longer without you.
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The pair sit around a fire, both staring into it. The older one offers the younger a cigarette, which he accepts. They smoke together without words for some time.
mwolpoff added a slugline in "Opening Scene" on 01/13/2010 [view]
INT. EXT. desert - night
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The younger man hesitates for a moment, most likely in a disoriented state, but soon nods. The older man hands him a canteen, of which he quickly drinks.
mwolpoff edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2010 [view]
Older Man
Thirsty?
mwolpoff added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2010 [view]
The younger man hesitates for a moment, most likely in a disoriented state, but soon nods. The older man hands him a canteen full of
mwolpoff added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2010 [view]
Older Man
You look thirsty.
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He is awakened by another man, this one much older. He seems experienced, natural to the environment, very Sam Elliot-esque.
mwolpoff added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2010 [view]
Some time later, he collapses under the shade of a tree, and falls asleep.
mwolpoff added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2010 [view]
At one point, his water bottle empties and in frustration he tosses it aside.
mwolpoff added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2010 [view]
He struggles through the day, the unadulterated sun getting the better of him as he nears heat exhaustion. His water bottle empties, and in
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