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David D (CONT'D)
I always thought the response to do you want to hang out sometime was "Oh, crap". Why is that? Is it because girls hate intellectual guys who have very cerebral ways of think?
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David D (CONT'D)
or even talk to a girl
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David D (CONT'D)
Why is that? Is it because girls hate intellectual guys who have very cerebral ways of think?
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David D (CONT'D)
or even talk to a girl, I get rejected.
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David D (CONT'D)
Or is it because girls hate guys who tuck their shirts int their pants and just read all the time?
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David D (CONT'D)
I wonder. I don't know. It seems that always manage to shoo them away. Oh, but therE is this one time. Oh what I would give to turn back time! Ok, well, the story went like this...
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David D
Oh Crap...
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(David is running to school and steps into a dog's dung. He looks at his shoe and lets out a sigh. He then looks at his watch and runs ahead to school.) (FLASHBACK)
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INT.MATH CLASS - MIDDAY
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David is running to school and steps into a dog's dung. He looks at his shoe and lets out a sigh. He then looks at his watch and runs ahead to school.
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EXT.BAIS - MORNING
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David then looks at his shoe. He then remembers something.
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David is sitting next to Julianna. They start to flirt back and forth. David suddenly crosses his leg when Julianna screams, and leaves the room. Mr.Thiessen runs after her. Guy 1, Girl 1, Guy 2, and Girl 2 looks at David and shakes their head.
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David D
What did I do?
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David is sitting next to Julianna. They start to flirt back and forth. David suddenly crosses his leg when Julianna screams, and leaves the room. Guy 1, Girl 1, Guy 2, and Girl 2 looks at David and shakes their head.
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INT.MATH CLASS - MIDDAY
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INT.MATH CLASS - MIDDAY
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David D
Good Night...
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Julianna (cont'd)
Wew, look at what I'm saying.. Well, Good night David!
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Julianna
Well, I want to be honest with you.. At first I didn't even like you a bit, but after tonight, I think I might have to rethink somethings...
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David D
It was my pleasure...
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Julianna
Well, here's my house... Thanks for everything David...
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David and Julianna laugh and walk beside each other.
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EXT.MIE NARIPAN - AFTERNOON
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EXT.JUJU'S HOUSE - NIGHT
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EXT.Mie Naripan- AFTERNOON
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They talk into the night.
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Julianna
Well, I like to do Calculus for fun..
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David D
Not a Soul!
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Julianna
Me? well, don't tell anyone ok?!
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David D
ummmm, so what are your hobbies?
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Julianna
So...
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David D
So...
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David is walking beside Julianna around Kota Baru. David accidentally trips and falls. Julianna laughs and helps him up. They go to Mie Naripan and eat noodles there. They look at each other then at the noodles. They hardly talk.
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EXT.SIDEWALK - AFTERNOON
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Guy 1, Guy 2, Girl 1, Girl 2 peers from a corner and high fives each other.
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Julianna
Sure...
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David D
Great! I'll pick you up around 6?
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Julianna
Um, I guess..
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David D
So, we got a date tomorrow?
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Julianna is talking to her friends when David walks up
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David D
Hey Julianna! If I can throw this stone into that trash can over there, would you let with me show you around on Thursday if the gang can't come along?
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INT.BAIS - MORNING
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Julianna just stares at David
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David D
I'll see you later to talk about our date! Good night Julianna!
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David throws the stone at a trash can. It goes in cleanly.
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David D
Yep..
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David D
Um, I won't come on Thursday
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Julianna
Haha
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David D
Hey Julianna! If I can throw this stone into that trashcan over there, would you go on a date with me on Thursday?
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