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KenFergione inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011. KenFergione made 34 other changes.
KenFergione inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon disappears. Teddy returns to work. Fade.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
Ooo! Crap. I gotta bring Walach my pages for that Dean Koontz wannabe.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
What are you working on?
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
I thought the author mailed a signed guarantee that it was a surefire bestseller and I believe this was the direct quote "The most perfect piece of writing since the bible"
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
I thought the author mailed a signed guarantee that it was a surefire bestseller and I believe this was the direct quote "The most perfect piece of writing since the bible"
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
I thought the author mailed a signed guarantee that it was a surefire bestseller and I believe he said
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
Yeah. I think I can work it out. Thanks, Bud. I better get to work if I want to get that promotion...This novel is a tough read.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
(Feigning defeat.)
Damn you and your rational thinking.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
As important as Josephine?
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
But... those things are important...
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
You have a tv, and a computer and stuff...
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
I thought about a yard sale but i don't really have...stuff.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
I thought about
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
Turning to prostitution would probably lessen some of the value of your engagement.
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
(Completely ignoring his friend's excitement)
Fantastic - And so expensive...
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
(Laughing at Teddy's demeanor)
Maybe Walach will give you a raise.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
Fantastic - And so expensive...
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
Jesus Man, Thats fantastic!
KenFergione inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
At this he hops up and comes into Teddy's office with a huge smile
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
Holy Shit!
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
I'm going to.... propose.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
Just on a whim?
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
teddy
I am taking Josie.
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
Paris?
(laughing)
When are you going to Paris?
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Simon
That doesn't look like the 'Tom Clancy meets Jane Austen
KenFergione edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Teddy is typing on his computer as SIMON pokes his head over the cubicle divider.
KenFergione edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
He gets up to put the DVD in.
KenFergione deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Josie
I'm ready when you are.
KenFergione deleted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Teddy’s eyes widen in surprise and he stares at her with his mouth open.
KenFergione edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Josie
Emily Blunt.
KenFergione inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Josie
Are you ready for the movie?
KenFergione edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Teddy grunts a few words on nonsense as he looks down at the disc realizing she had meant the movie gets up to put the DVD in.
KenFergione added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Josie
Are you ready for the movie?
KenFergione inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/21/2011 [view]
Teddy’s eyes widen in surprise and he stares at her with his mouth open.
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