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HiddenVisionFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015. HiddenVisionFilms made 18 other changes.
HiddenVisionFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Jack
Thanks for embarrassing us, again. And now we're late! We have to be at the bus stop in three minutes! And it's two blocks from here!
HiddenVisionFilms inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
A person from the crowd emerges.
HiddenVisionFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Person
Sir, are you alright.
HiddenVisionFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Jack
Thanks for embarrassing us, again. And now we
HiddenVisionFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Person
No, it's no problem. Here you go.
HiddenVisionFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
"The Box" attempts to get up, but he falls again. The person helps him up this time.
HiddenVisionFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Box
No no, I'm fine.
HiddenVisionFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
"The Box" speaks, but due to CP his words are mumbled.
HiddenVisionFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Person
Here let me help you.
HiddenVisionFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
The Box is
HiddenVisionFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Jack
You don't need any help, you're fine, get up!
HiddenVisionFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Person goes to help him up.
HiddenVisionFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Person from Crowd
Sir, are you alright.
HiddenVisionFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Jack
We are going to be late. We can't blow this one.
HiddenVisionFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Standing in the crowd is Jack, although this version of him is standing upright and talking eloquently. He walks toward Jack in the "box."
HiddenVisionFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Voice
Oh get up, hobble it off! We're going to be late.
HiddenVisionFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
Jack, 24, is a man suffering from cerebral palsy. He is awkwardly running down the sidewalk, obviously late for something. He is running generally slow, but is moving wildly. He suddenly falls to the ground.
HiddenVisionFilms added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 05/04/2015 [view]
INT. ext. busy sidewalk - day
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