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Americo24 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012. Americo24 made 42 other changes.
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Ends.
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'Now James plans to major in Anthropology, with an emphasis on culture'.
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'He became aware of the diversity of culture. He met many new friends'
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'James ended up staying at Downtown Magnets'
Americo24 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
Before the credits the story continues in Dialogue:
Americo24 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
james walks back to the school. The screen fades on his way.
Americo24 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
james Voice
Well, I guess it's worth a shot.
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James looks back at the school
Americo24 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
james Voice
Or maybe I just didn't try hard enough to learn about these people.
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James starts walking away from the school. THen he stops.
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james Voice
Maybe I need to go to a school where there are people like me.
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James walks out of the school. It's Daylight out side. The camera is in front of him, following him. The sun light hits his face. James looks back at the school.
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james Voice
Diversity in Los Angeles isn't anythig to celebrate. No, it was nothing that I thought it was. But Los Angeles, moreso, is separation.
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The scene goes black. The music fades. The detached scene is back. There is a voice over.
Americo24 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
The scene changes again. A group of people come up to James on the desk. There is a very diverse group, three different ethnic groups. They sit down and talk. The camera circles around them. Music is playing in the background. Scene changes of them walking together. Scene changes again with the new group of friends at the locker, laughing about something. There is a close up of james smiling--he's happy.
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The scene goesblack
Americo24 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
The scene changes again. A group of people come up to James on the desk. There is a very diverse group, three different ethnic groups. They sit down and talk. The camera circles around them. Music is playing in the background. Scene changes of them walking together. Scene changes again with the new group of friends at the locker, laughing about something. There is a close up of james smiling--he's happy.
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The two guys leave the group leaving James alone. The screen blurs and the image of James detached, as before now appears. James nods his head. But then a faint smile occurs. The camera is closer than before.
Americo24 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
The two guys leave the group leaving James alone. The screen blurs and the image of James detached, as before now appears.
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chinese guy 2
Yeah man. Do you know anything about the chinese culture. I mean really, that's just insulting.
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chinese guy 2
Yeah man. Do you know anything about the chinese restaurant
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chinese guy 1
Man are you kidding me that's some messed up stuff.
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The group is insulted. There is conversation and commotion.
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james
You know by my house there is this nice teriyaki place. I's like the best chinese food on the block.
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James turns towards the group and contributes to the conversation.
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chinese guy 2
Man I hear you. Though my mom can make some nice wonton soup with shimp, man.
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chinese guy 1
Man I love chinese food. Man my mom makes some killer pot stickers.
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The scene switches again in a blur. James is sitting by a group. Here hears the group talking about Chinese food.
Americo24 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
The previous scenes fades. The original scene of James sitting at the table detached continues. The music becomes more powerful.
Americo24 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
The previous scenes fades. The original scene of James sitting at the table detached continues.
Americo24 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
Camera blurs and switches scene. James walks by a group of girls. They give disgusted faces. Soon they resume to talking amongst each other. As James leaves. The camera is in front of him, reflecting his image. As he leaves, a couple of steps away by now, he here's a large amount of laughter. The Camera stops, turns and see James walking away.
Americo24 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
Camera blurs and switches scene. James walks by a group of girls. They give disgusted faces. Soon they resume to talking amongst each other. As James leaves. The camera is in front of him, reflecting his image. As he leaves, a couple of steps away by now, he here's a large amount of laughter. The Camera stops, turns and see AJames walking away.
Americo24 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/14/2012 [view]
james Voice
I never thought finding friends and getting to know people would be so hard.
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The camera scans around the student union. Students are everywhere.
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James is sitting down at a round table alone. His bag is on the table and his hands are in his pockets. He stares into the distance as if he has no purpose. He's detached.
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INT. int downtown magnets b-level student union
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There is a black screen. The caption Lunch appears.
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james starts walking towards the crowd. The camera fades.
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Never in my life have I ever seen this many people before. It was amazing. Diversity --Unbelievable. I wanted to know them, i wanted to know their backgrounds; Where they came from; and who they really were.
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James walks in front of the door way. In front of him are large groups of people. They all mind their own business. This is, of course, during the early parts of the morning before school starts.
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INT. int. downtown magnets a level entrance
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INT. James is walking outside towards DMHS. The camera follows james and, eventually, The camera adjust to get a full view of the school.
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