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JasonWeiler inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/03/2012. JasonWeiler made 3 other changes. more
Jason
Generally.
JasonWeiler edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/21/2011. more
Jason
I'm just saying it looks like we are on a date..
taramillette added a comment to Jason and Tara Short on 05/28/2011. more
Hah! I love it. I don't know why but that Lobster line had me laughing out loud. I do think some of the dialogue at the beginning can be a bit more condensed. A couple of those lines feel synonymous. Honestly there isn't much fat to trim there in the first place, but pushing a few of them together might be good.
JasonWeiler edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/28/2011. JasonWeiler made 42 other changes. more
Jason
It's like Hey Tara I'm on a date with you why don't you just come over here and give me a big ol' smackeroo... right on my shlong eh?
 

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