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EXT. SCHOOL - day

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Hannah walks to the main doors of the school shaking her head and smiling.

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hannah

Craig will done fine on his midterms.

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Hannah opens the door and walks down the school hallway. She slows down and approaches the Coaches' office door.

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Hannah (CONT'D)

Must not be here. I'll come back later.

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Hannah leaves the school, gets into her truck and goes back to her cookie shop.

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int. cookie shop - day

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Hannah is behind the counter rolling cookie dough into balls while her sister Andrea sits across from her drinking coffee.

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Andrea

So what did Craig say.

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Hannah

Nothing.

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Andrea

You mean he refused to answer your questions?

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Hannah

No. He answered them. He just didn't tell me anything. He said he didn't know anyone on the team who was using steroids or any other kind of drugs.

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Andrea shrugs

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Andrea

That's about what I'd expect him to say. He wouldn't be very popular if he ratted on his teammates. Do you think he knew and just didn't want to tell you?

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Hannah

Exactly. At least he seemed to realize how serious it was. He said he'd learned about steroids at basketball camp, and I have a feeling he'll talk to his teammate and try to get some help for him. That's good, but it doesn't help us.

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andrea

How about Mike? Do you think he's learned anything from the roster?

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Hannah shrugs

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HANNAH

I don't know. I haven't talked to him since we split up after breakfast at the Corner Tavern.

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andrea

I have to go pick up the girls. Call me later on tonight if you find out anything new.

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int. car - evening

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Hannah looks at the clock on her radio as she pulls into the high school parking lot for the bake-off. She stops by the News production truck to drop off P.K.'s pen. She sees P.K. sitting on the trailer steps smoking. Hannah rolls down the window and shouts to him.

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hannah

I've got the pen you let me use last night. Wait a second and I'll give it to you.

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Hannah parks her truck and P.K. walks over to her truck.

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P.K.

I can let you in the trailer, but I have to run inside the school and get the cameras set up on the stage.

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hannah

Ok that's fine, but could you take in my box of ingredients inside and place them at my station for me?

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P.K.

Sure Hannah.

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P.K. opens the back door of Hannah's truck and grabs a box. he shuts the back door.

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hannah

I'll just put the pen on his desk.

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P.K.

Alright.

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Hannah turns off her truck and gets out while P.K. unlocks the production truck then walks toward the school building. Hannah slowly walks up the steps to the production truck and opens the door then enters.

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int. production truck - night

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Hannah walked down the narrow hallway of the truck to the office in the rear. She reaches for the handle as she hears a car pulling up. She pauses for a slight second then continues to go into the office. She places Masons' pen in his holder then glances at a picture on his desk. She notices that Masons' cuff links were horse heads with diamonds for eyes.

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hannah

He lied to me! That means Mason is the killer!

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Hannah suddenly feels light-headed then she gasps when she hears footsteps coming up the metal stairs of the truck. Hannah feels the urge to run, but her body is frozen from the truth she just discovered. Mason enters the truck with a unfriendly smile on his face that causes Hannah to feel sick.

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Mason

There you are, Hannah. I believe we have an appointment.

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Mason gives a smile that gives Hannah the chills.

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hannah

You're right Mason. Let's go. I was just returning your pen I borrowed of yours last night.

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Hannah brushes past Mason and reaches for the door knob. She tries to open the door, but can't due to her trebling hand.

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Mason

I've got it.

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Mason turns the knob and opens the door but blocks the exit. Hannah tries her best not to scream, but she so badly wanted to get outside.

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Mason (CONT'D)

Why are your hands so shaky?

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hannah

The heater in my truck went out and I'm freezing.

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mason

Very good, Hannah. If I didn't know any better, I just might have believed you.

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Mason smiled again as Hannah's heart begins to beat faster.

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hannah

What?

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mason

I know you figured it out. It's right on your face.

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hannah

What are you talking about?

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mason

It's too late for games, Hannah. I know you saw the pictures Lucy took of me before I killed Boyd. I had to kill her too, she knew too much. I also knew sooner or later you would be itching to find out who killed them. Craig even told me how you asked him about steroids. You put two and two together and realized I killed his coach because he wouldn't let my boy play in the state game, and Lucy was a witness. You figured it out and I know you did. Now I have to kill you, too.

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Hannah gulped really hard trying to get the lump out of her throat, but that didn't help.

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hannah

You can't kill me here. P.K. will be back any second.

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mason

No he won't. I waited until he went inside o pull up. Let's go to the stage where the bake off is held. Once the cameras start rolling and they find your body, our ratings for our news show will hit the roof.

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Mason laughs and begins to push Hannah forward. Hannah tries to resist by digging her heels into the floor and grabbing onto the doorway.

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mason (CONT'D)

Forget it, Hannah.

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Mason pulls a gun out of his pocket and puts it to Hannah's back.

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mason (CONT'D)

I'll kill you here if I have to.

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Hannah

Fine. You win, Mason.

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Hannah begins walking down the metal steps. Mason stops her and looks down at a box sitting on the steps.

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mason

What is that?

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Hannah wanted to lie, but decided not too. She exhales.

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hannah

It's my box of ingredients.

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Hannah thought P.K. took it inside for her. A worried look came across her face.

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nason

Take it with you. No, wait. What's in it?

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mason

Pick it up.

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Mason jams the gun into Hannah's back. Hannah bends down to pick up the box. She is tempted to run but remembers that Mason had a gun still.

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hannah

Butter, sugar, eggs, molasses, flour, soda, and spices.

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mason

Walk.

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int. school auditorium - night

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Hannah walks up the stage stairs then walks toward her kitchen set on the stage.

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mason

Put the box on the counter.

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Hannah places the box on the counter desperately wanting someone to walk in and catch Mason in the act.

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hannah

This is a bad idea, Mason. Someone could walk in at any moment.

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Mason laughs.

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mason

Too bad you'll be dead already.

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Hannah sees one of the studio cameras on her counter and attempts to turn it on. She pretends to trip, knocking over her box, and as she is falling she pushes the record button.

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mason (CONT'D)

Get up. You're making too much noise.

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Hannah rises. As she does, she reaches for the busted open bag of flour. She places it on top in the box. She had to get him to confess to his murders while the camera was rolling.

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hannah

I've got a question, Mason.

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mason

What?

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Mason motions her toward the sink as Hannah reaches for a big handful of flour.

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hannah

Di you mean to kill Coach Watson?

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mason

If I meant to kill him, I would have taken my gun. I just wanted him to agree not to suspend Craig.

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hannah

But if it was a fight that got out of hand, why didn't you call the police? You could have claimed self-defense.

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mason

I would have had to tell the police why we were fighting and I couldn't do that. Once Craig gets on a good college team, he'll go all the way to the pros. But if the recruiters find out he has been using steroids, he can kiss that athletics scholarship goodbye.

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hannah

But don't they test you for drugs before you get the scholarship?

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mason

Of course, but nothing will show up because the drug I gave him is so new, they don't even have a test for it yet.

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Hannah looks at Mason long and hard.

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mason (CONT'D)

Everything would have been fine if Craig hadn't gotten worried and begged Coach Watson for help. If he had just kept his mouth shut like I said, he'd still be able to play.

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Hannah felt sick.

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hannah

Did Lucy know about the steroids?

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mason

Of course not. She got a picture of me talking to Boyd and that could have shown that I was the last person who was with him and I could have been added to his list of suspect killers.

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hannah

But you did kill him.

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mason

Can it, missy!

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Mason's face began to turn red and he tightened his grip on the gun while glaring angrily at Hannah.

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hannah

Sorry.

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mason

Enough of these questions. Your wasting my time.

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Mason grinned.

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mason (CONT'D)

Speaking of time, yours is running out.

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Hannah tried to think of another question, but failed.

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mason (CONT'D)

It's getting late. Guess you wont be baking anymore of those overrated cookies of yours. It's time for you too....

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Mason glances up at her, while he does so Hannah throw the flour in Mason's face. He screams from the pain in his eyes as Hannah charges towards him and smashes the hand with the gun into the stove. She feels good when he screams again. She smashes is hand into the stove again and again. The third time she hears a snap in his wrist. The gun flew from his hand. She grabbed it and jammed it in his back.

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int. hallway - evening

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Hannah's boyfriend, Officer Mike, hears commotion in the auditorium and begins running down the hallway. He bursts threw the doors and see Hannah holding a gun to Mason's back on the stage.

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mike

Hannah what's going on? Are you alright?

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Mike runs to the stage.

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Hannah

He killed Boyd and Lucy. I got him to confess it on tape. Cuff him.

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mike

You what? Hannah, do you know how dangerous this is? You could have been killed!

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Mike puts cuffs on Mason and Hannah backs away from them.

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hannah

Yeah tell me about it.

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Mike shakes his head and escorts Mason off the stage.

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mike

We'll talk later, but right now we need to get you outside to get your story and get him behind bars.

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Mike exits the school with Mason in custody and Hannah right behind him.

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