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A member of a crime syndication tries to leave against the wishes of the leader.

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Thomas_Pynn joined the project! on 12/18/2012. more
David_P edited an action in "The Opening Revisited" on 06/09/2010. David_P made 7 other changes. more
HE STEPS INSIDE AND WALKS DOWN A HALLWAY. HE TURNS A CORNER TO SEE HIS BOSS SITTING IN THE COUCH READING THE NEWSPAPER. HE CREEPS UP BEHIND HIM AND PULLS OUT HIS GUN AND TAKES AIM AT HIS HEAD. HE PULLS THE TRIGGER AND BLOOD IS SPLATTERED ONTO HIS FACE. HE TAKES OUT THE JEFFERSON FIVE COIN AND DROPS IT ON HIS BOSS. THE PHONE NEXT TO THE COUCH RINGS. HE PICKS IT UP.
David_P edited an action in "Opening Scene" on 06/09/2010. David_P made 6 other changes. more
THE CAMERA DRIFTS TO THE BOTTOM OF THE BED, SEES SLIPPERS, AND DRIFTS UP THE BED TO A BODY SLEEPING IN THE BED. HE ROLLS OVER FROM HIS SIDE TO HIS BACK. SHOT CUTS TO EXTREME CLOSE-UP OF EYES AND THEY OPEN WHEN THE DRUMMING COMES CRASHING IN. ALSO, AT THAT MOMENT IT GOES FROM COLOR TO BLACK AND WHITE.
David_P create a branch of the scene titled "Opening Scene" on 04/16/2010. David_P made 4 other changes. more
David_P edited dialogue in "Girlfriend" on 03/03/2010. David_P made 20 other changes. more
"A" (CONT'D)
(VOICEOVER)
That one word summed up everything my current situation has turned into. The realization that my own girlfriend worked for Jefferson Five hit me harder than a freight train crashing into Fort Knox. But I now knew what I had to do. I had to cut off the head of the snake. I was going to the corner of...
 

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