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JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010. JonHa made 40 other changes.
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum
Mister
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Michael
What would you like us to call you?
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum
Do not call me pal.
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum shoots the gun directly above Michaels head, Michael cowers to the ground
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Michael
Look pal, just what exactly do you want.
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Michael ties up the rest of the lawyers in the room
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum
You, tie them up
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum pulls out a gun and starts aiming it at the people in the room, then aims it at Michael
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum motions for everyone to go into a room
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum shoots the ceiling
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum, Michael, and eight lawyers are sitting in a conference room.
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum motions for everyone to stand against the wall, then takes off his coat revealing what appears to be dynamite strapped to his waste.
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum pulls a strand of yellow nylon rope and a switchblade from his pocket.
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum waves his gun at the people again
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum turns the gun on Michael again
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum
I don't want to hurt anybody
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum waves his gun at the people again
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum pulls a strand of yellow nylon rope and a switchblade from his pocket.
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum
Quiet down please.
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Lawyers mumble and groan
JonHa edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum
Everyone in the conference room now!
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum motions for everyone to stand against the wall, then takes off his coat revealing what appears to be dynamite strapped to his waste.
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum, michael, and eight lawyers are sitting in a conference room.
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
INT.- CONFERENCE ROOM- 12:30 PM
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JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum shoots the ceiling
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum
Everyone is the conference room now!
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum motions for everyone to go into a room
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum motions for everyone to go into a conference room
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
MADAM Devier
He's got a gun!
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MADAM DEVIER enters the room
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Bum
Shut up.
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
michael
Don't Shoot!
JonHa edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum pulls out a gun and starts aiming it at the people in the room, then aims it at michael
JonHa edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
INT. int.- large Law building- 12:00 pm
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
bum pulls out a gun and starts aiming it at the people in the room
JonHa added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
Michael
What are you doing here? Someone call security
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
BUM walks up and stands by him
JonHa added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
MICHAEL exits the elevator
JonHa added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 11/10/2010 [view]
INT. int.- large building elevator- 12:00 pm
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