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INT. Characters on stage

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We were thinking on where we wanted to go.

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Jane

What about Florida?

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Mom

No

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with all the ideas we finally decided Gatlinburg, Tenessee. And Jane gets to pick a friends. She picked Maddie.

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INT. Mom and Jane — enter

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Mom and Jane get in the car and go pick up Maddie at her house.

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Maddie enter's with bags.

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They get to Maddie's house and out her stuff in the car.

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Jane

We're on the way! I cant wait till we go to Ripley's Haunted Adventure.

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Maddie

I so want to go there, there are monsters people say.

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Maddie looks at Jane in a sarcastic way.

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Mom

Well, we have a long drive ahead.

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On our way Maddie and I feel asleep.

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Mom (CONT'D)

Wake up! We're here

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We all screamed

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All

Yah!

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INT. All — enter

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We get there and see that our cabin has 39 steps. Go to the door and puch the code in.

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Maddie

This place is cool!

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Mom

Jane, could you walk the dogs?

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Jane

Sure

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We all fall asleep.

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INT. Character's are all ready there

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They are thinking on where they want to go today.

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Maddie

How about we go to the candy place?

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Jane

Nah. What about Ripley's Haunted Adventure?

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Maddie

Sure, that's fine.

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Jane

What about you mom, are you good with going?

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Mom

Yes, it will be fun.

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The scene changes to outside getting in the car.

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INT. In the car

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They are in the car driving to Ripley's Haunted Adventure.

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Maddie

I don't know about this.

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Jane

You will be fine.

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Mom

We're here!

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The scene changes to Ripley's Haunted Adventure. The scene is set with a House that has scary decorations all over and a window that has a monster behind it.

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WHen we walked up we saw a green scallie monster sitting behind a desk.

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Jane

EW!

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Mom

Three tickets please.

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Green Scallie Monster

Would you like to purchase a a mini flashlight?

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Mom

Why not.

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They got there flashlights and headed to the elevator. They get there and see another monster. THe monster is dressed in a mummy costume. Extra people are in the elevator.

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Mummy Monster

Listen to Master William when you get up.

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All except the mummy

Ok.

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Maddie

I'm scared!

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Jane

It will be fine!

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The scen changes to a R.I.P room.

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When we got up there we saw Master William.

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Master William

Before you enter this Haunted Mansion, do NOT touch any of my things or my creepy family members. Single file line and touch the person in front of you shoulder.

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Mom

WHy do I get stuck in the back where monster's can grab me?

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The scene changes and has a room with a black curtain.

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We went in and saw a black curtain allof a sudden someone scream's.

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Black Curtain

Aghhhhhh!

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Then we hear a microphone.

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Microphone

Wha ha ha!

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THey are walking ans they see that everything is becoming real.

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Mom

Stay close to me girl's!

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We all screamed because there was a monster standing right next to us breathing really hard.

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Jane

Aghhhhhh!

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As I woke, I saw a sighn that said, Welcome to Gatlinburg.

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Jane (CONT'D)

Mom, I don't care what we do in Gatlinburg as long, I just dont want to go to Ripley's Haunted Adventure.

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