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advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009. advancedenglish made 39 other changes.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Jane
Mom, I don't care what we do in Gatlinburg as long, I just dont want to go to Ripley's Haunted Adventure.
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As I woke, I saw a sighn that said, Welcome to Gatlinburg.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Jane
Aghhhhhh!
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We all screamed because there was a monster standing right next to us breathing really hard.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Mom
Stay close to me girl's!
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THey are walking ans they see that everything is becoming real.
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Microphone
Wha ha ha!
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Then we hear a microphone.
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Black Curtain
Aghhhhhh!
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We went in and saw a black curtain allof a sudden someone scream's.
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The scene changes and has a room with a black curtain.
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The scen changes to a R.I.P room.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Mom
WHy do I get stuck in the back where monster's can grab me?
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Master William
Before you enter this Haunted Mansion, do NOT touch any of my things or my creepy family members. Single file line and touch the person in front of you shoulder.
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When we got up there we saw Master William.
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Jane
It will be fine!
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Maddie
I'm scared!
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All except the mummy
Ok.
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Mummy Monster
Listen to Master William when you get up.
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They got there flashlights and headed to the elevator. They get there and see another monster. THe monster is dressed in a mummy costume. Extra people are in the elevator.
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Mom
Why not.
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Green Scallie Monster
Would you like to purchase a a mini flashlight?
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Mom
Three tickets please.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Jane
EW!
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WHen we walked up we saw a green scallie monster sitting behind a desk.
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The scene changes to Ripley's Haunted Adventure. The scene is set with a House that has scary decorations all over and a window that has a monster behind it.
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Mom
We're here!
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Jane
You will be fine.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Maddie
I don't know about this.
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They are in the car driving to Ripley's Haunted Adventure.
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INT. In the car
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Jane
You will be fine.
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Maddie
I dont know about this.
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INT. Jane, Maddie, and Momenter
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They walk up to the green scallie monster who is sitting behind the desk.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Jane
You will be fine.
advancedenglish added dialogues in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
Maddie
I dont know about this.
advancedenglish added an action in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
They walk up to the green scallie monster who is sitting behind the desk.
advancedenglish added a slugline in "Scene 5" on 01/28/2009 [view]
INT. Jane, Maddie, and Momenter
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