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3 different groups of mercenaries are all paid by the same person (Mr. Riot) to kill a man named Andrew Joffrey. Each of them has been instructed to grab him from his room, take him to the basement, tie him up, and kill him however necessary. Each of them have been told to bring Joffrey's right ear back to Mr. Riot. They all realize they are trying to do the same thing, so they fight to be able to kill him. However, most of them die, except for Pat and Gary. Gary is shot in the stomach, but Pat is fine. Pat goes to finally kill Joffrey, but he is angry at Mr. Riot, so he asks Joffrey why Mr. Riot wants him dead. He reveals that Mr. Riot is testing them to see which of them is the most deadly. He is doing it because he wants to know which ones he wants to use to kill the President.

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derekdemko added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. derekdemko made 66 other changes. more
Pat picks up Gary and they exit the room, followed by Katherine, who takes her sword and gun. She leaves, then returns a few moments later and shoots Carrie in the head. END.
derekdemko inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. derekdemko made 72 other changes. more
Gary
Yea?
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The door to the room flies open and two people enter.
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carrie
(spits in his face)
You fucking killed Eli. You fucking killed him!
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gary
Oh thanks man, you know that helps so much. The hope of a thousand children has saved me from THE FUCKING BULLET IN MY FUCKING STOMACH YOU CUNT... sorry that was the bullet talking.
 

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