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The last deed that 17-year-old boy does for the one person he loves and cares for.

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qdavidlamb edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/20/2009. qdavidlamb made 4 other changes. more
MOM
Fine, but thats it... That's all I want to hear from you... Got it?!
1agreene joined the project! on 02/19/2009. more
qdavidlamb edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/19/2009. more
NED is sitting in the corner of his school's 2nd floor hallway. Busy students and slamming lockers surround him. Ned stares blankly at a picture of himself and his girlfriend, LANA. --FADE TO BLACK(Flashback)--
ifhollywood edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/19/2009. ifhollywood made 1 other comment and 5 other changes. more
Ned is sitting with his friends talking at the lunch table. Ned then takes a bite from his food when he catches the eyes of Lana, who is sitting right across his lunch table. She just looks at him. Ned then takes one last big bite from his food and starts packing up. Lana stands up and starts walking towards Ned. Ned is already up and walking out of the cafeteria.
jc_perfumemaster commented on the scene "This is your first scene.." on 02/17/2009. jc_perfumemaster made 1 other comment and 5 other changes. more
The ending will end with a close up of her friend's mouth as she says Ned passed away..
 

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